Ontology: snoring

Metaphor: the sound of a small train

Dad's Snoring (Modern Poetry)

Like a small train on the mountain.

It reminds me.

Beautiful forest

Dad's snoring

Always on and off.

Makes me worry that the train will derail.

good

Dad's snoring stopped.

Has the train arrived at the station?

Appreciate:

Dad's snoring is a childish song. The little poet keenly grasped "Dad's snoring" as the subject of writing, because she found dad's snoring very interesting. The little poet used an image metaphor. She felt that her father's snoring was "like a small train on the mountain". Dad's snoring stopped, and she felt that the train had arrived. The whole poem is full of childlike interest and affection between father and son.