Recently, another TV series "My Husband" ushered in a grand finale. Compared with the "amazing" of the beginning of the play, this is definitely a bad ending. A large part of the reason for the bad ending is that the screenwriter didn't straighten out all kinds of plots on the premise of promoting the plot. On the contrary, it seems absurd and unsmooth on the whole, and it is quite old-fashioned to highlight the protagonist only by reducing the opponent's intelligence.

Sort out the plot loopholes

First of all, when Yining made porcelain according to her own drawings in Jiangning's room, the audience thought it was an ancient version of the pistol and a unique porcelain of Yining. However, seeing the plot of Lin 'an War, we found that everyone had this kind of artifact, and a large number of technicians who made this kind of artifact were coerced to make it. This story is a bit inconsistent. If Yining is not the only one, there is no need to create such an illusion for the audience.

Second, why is Yining the only one who uses this kind of utensils in Lin 'an City? When fighting Bao's troops, we found that the thief didn't use weapons. At that time, the thief camp made more than 65,438+0,000 artifacts, but it was not distributed to the brothers. Is it because they have been in the mountains for a long time and can't use advanced weapons? This is very contradictory.

When they were chased to the gate of Badaoying, the people in Geng Sanatorium took care of each other. However, according to Bao's character, it is impossible to beat and kick with a knife in his hand and enjoy the pleasure of "slowly torturing a person to death", but it should be fatal to continue hunting.

Other brothers from Badaoying, unknown so, came out to rescue them and were all killed by Bao. Why can Geng nursery delay time? Is this just to give Yining time to load ammunition? This logic is not smooth. The leader of Bao has already stood in front of this scene. Whether it's being assassinated by a beautiful woman around you, or being disposed of by a big brother who knows he's corrupt, it's unreasonable not to be held back by a person who doesn't even have a weapon.

Third, Master He went offline too suddenly, and there was no logic at all. In the court battle, we always thought that Master He was the ultimate boss, who always did great things with few words, looked smart and had a high IQ, and won the trust of the emperor.

However, when I went to the State of Jing to negotiate peace, Emperor Jing misunderstood me because there was an army in Hanguguan. A surname in a certain country, if it is killed, it will be killed, without even a word of defense. Such a cruel king, facing Yining, endured again and again, not only made him talk a lot, but also saved Qin Lao with Yining's acting skills. This is Jingdi's special love for Yining?

Fourthly, the most exaggerated plot is that Yining went to Guo Jing to make peace, in fact, she wanted to bring her own emperor? Jing met the Emperor of Wu and thought he was full of sincerity. I wonder if there is a saying that "the emperor made the world"? How to release the chip delivered to you easily? The logic of this screenwriter is really incomprehensible. The people who set up Emperor Jing are not three-year-old children, which is silly.

Fake marriage = squeezing the surplus value of watermelon

As a screenwriter with male frequency, the play naturally takes "disrespect for women" to the extreme. In order to save her life, Yining did not refuse to marry watermelon. On the contrary, his attitude is tacit. Obviously, in his layout, marrying a watermelon is the fastest way to improve work efficiency.

Although watermelon put forward "fake marriage", Yining should know how important it was to see a woman's honor at that time. Even if Liu Watermelon is careless and thoughtless, no matter how careful he is, he will definitely think of this.

But in the face of "success", he still chose to "use Liu Watermelon" to squeeze out her surplus value through fake marriage, and then ignored it. After the victory of the Anti-Japanese War, he directly regarded the two as unmarried, and naturally returned to Jiangning with his original wife Su Taner.

So is the writer's idea in this play that women are disposable goods? When necessary, they can use marriage to make deals or calculations. When you don't need it, just kick it away and pretend nothing happened. This kind of values is very different, thinking that Yining people have collapsed in the face of interests and become people who use feelings as bait. Why can Liu Watermelon be successfully used? That's because the feelings of two people are not equal.

When Badaoying occupied an absolute advantage, Liu Watermelon took a fancy to him because of his special way of dealing with people, and was made a good impression on him. Sooner or later, the brotherhood between the two people is getting stronger and stronger. However, because Liu Watermelon is a young woman, it is inevitable that she will gradually have a crush on her. This person is very special and interesting. Just because of her personality, this feeling can only be hidden in her heart, otherwise she will be sorry for her strong self-esteem.

Until he was killed, Liu Watermelon had to tell the truth in order to save his life, so as to force the sage to leave people by the sword. Therefore, Liu Watermelon's feelings for him are faint, similar to "guarding the home and protecting the hospital". She looked at Yining and Su Taner from a distance, trying to hide her thoughts so as not to embarrass Yining. Although she is also one of the thieves, her love goes back and forth without any pressure.

She explained to Yining's feelings that "there is another way to express love, that is, I hope that that person will live a better and happier life. It doesn't have to be, I am happy to watch it from afar. "

Business is difficult to govern the country, and big countries trade wars.

The opening audience of "widowed" was amazed by it, and the plot of the design was very consistent with the design before Yining crossed. He was originally a business elite and was framed. So he used modern business ideas to spread freely in ancient society, and won the love of consumers in Jiangning City with consumption ideas such as "joining", "group buying" and "customization". Preserved egg business and Bucun business are booming.

He also understood the market rules of "futures" and used the price increase to raise the market price of silk futures, which eventually led to the oversupply of silk prices, and the fishermen benefited. These methods of doing business are actually in line with Yining's personal design and unique skills as a traveler.

But in the later period, the overall plot was abruptly sublimated into "national justice." From Yining's point of view, he is from China, so Jiangning and Wu Dynasty are not his hometown, and he doesn't have such deep feelings for these areas, so those feelings of "home country" actually no longer exist in his eyes. As a result, Yining's feelings can't be realized when dealing with the "national justice", and it is impossible to give up for the public.

Besides, Qin Lao is the only bridge between him and state affairs. This person is a minister entrusted by the first emperor. Naturally, he has his own belief in the country and gives up himself for it.

But what is the relationship between Qin Lao and Yining? At best, be a chess friend+forget to make friends. Can such mutual affection lead to life? In other words, it is this mutual affection that makes Yining give up her comfortable life as a wealthy businessman. But do you have to get involved in a complicated situation? If we only rely on our feelings for our country and trust in Qin Lao, these two points are difficult to convince the audience, because both feelings are not in place, so what about giving up life and freedom?

It is enough to compare Yining's feelings for Sutaner. If Yining gave her life for Sutaner, it would be completely understandable and smooth. However, it is unreasonable for Yining to die for her country and go to court for Qin Lao who retired from the mountains under the rule of a bad king.

The ending reads "Within a year, Wu will perish", paving the way for the content of the second season, and blood shed of Wu will come again. The decisive battle between the two great powers will be inevitable after Jing has accumulated enough strength with the "Six Kingdoms of Qingyun".

In the play, some business figures framed Yining in modern times, and two intersecting figures affected the economies of two different countries. It seems that the next season should not be a simple military war, but a commercial war about free trade between the two countries, just like trade barriers in modern society. How to make a choice at the height of barriers? This is a problem that Yining needs to solve next season. A trade war between big countries is imminent!