Take a look at the parallel phrase: its language signs are the conjunctions "and, or" and pauses, etc. It complicates the sentence, leading to improper word order, improper collocation, illogical, incomplete or redundant and other language defects.
①This table tennis hall has complete facilities and can provide table tennis enthusiasts with different levels of table tennis equipment such as tables, rackets, jerseys, and sneakers.
(Jiangxi Volume) ② This fund is a special fund that provides certain subsidies to public welfare forest managers for their management, tending, protection and construction expenses.
(Anhui Volume) ③ Regarding issues such as adjusting wages, issuing bonuses, and improving employee welfare benefits, the article provides detailed provisions and profound explanations in theory and policy, which has strong guiding significance and operability.
(Hubei volume) ④ It is very important to improve the quality of breakfast. Breakfast nutrition should provide two-thirds of the vitamins and minerals required by the human body every day. Therefore, we must not be careless about breakfast (Sichuan volume) ⑤ The ability to obtain information has become
The premise and foundation of students' independent learning is also an important symbol for determining and measuring students' learning ability and level.
(Tianjin volume) Brief analysis ①② are logical errors and incompleteness using pauses as language marks. "Jerseys and sneakers" do not belong to "table tennis equipment", ② should be "expenses for..."; ③~⑤ are respectively
Improper word order, ambiguity and improper matching using "and" as the language mark, ③ putting "profound explanation" before "detailed regulations", ④ replacing "two-thirds of the total amount" with "vitamins and minerals"
position, ⑤ delete "measure" and look at the negative words: its language signs are the negative words "no", "otherwise", "eliminate", etc., the conjunctive use of negative adverbs and their use with rhetorical questions, verbs and adjectives with negative meanings,
It is easy to cause logical errors or redundancy.
⑥AIDS has three major transmission routes: sexual transmission, blood transmission, and mother-to-child transmission. We need to take urgent action to stop its spread. Otherwise, if we do not take urgent action, it will spread rapidly and pose a huge threat to human health.
(Hubei Volume) Brief Analysis ⑥ "Whether" means "if not", which is repeated below. Delete "no emergency action" and look at the quantity phrases: its language signs are "one hundred and eighty", "nearly", etc.
Words expressing quantity or range, reducing the misuse of multiples and quantity phrases when used in conjunction with adverbs and pronouns expressing quantity or range, can easily lead to improper collocation, inconsistency or redundancy.
⑦Walking in the peach orchard, the rows, rows, and trees of the peach grove will make you forget to leave; you can also pick them at your own expense after visiting China, and you will feast on the soft and juicy big peaches.
(Beijing Volume) ⑧ After the factory implemented the production responsibility system, its efficiency has been significantly improved. The number of scraps per month has dropped from one thousand to one hundred, and the scrap rate has dropped nine times.
(Guangdong volume) Brief analysis ⑦ is the improper combination of definite numerals and collective nouns; only fractions can be used to reduce the number of expressions, so ⑧ changes "nine times" to "90%".
Fourth, look at the two-sided words: Its linguistic signs are "success or failure", "key", etc., resulting in improper matching of one-sided and two-sided words.
⑨The spokesperson of the National Tourism Administration denied the issue of whether tickets are charged for seven red tourist attractions including Tiananmen Square at the press conference.
(National Volume Ⅰ) Brief analysis ⑨ is that the two sides and one side of the language using "whether" as the language mark are not properly matched, so "whether" is removed.
Fifth, look at function words or prepositional phrases: their language signs are the preposition "right", the adverb "no", the conjunction "although...but", etc. Their misuse, mixed use, abuse, and misplacement can easily lead to improper collocation, improper word order, incompleteness, and redundancy.
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⑩Scientific workers need to be open-minded. Even colleagues with different academic views from their own should be honest with each other and cooperate sincerely.
(Zhejiang Volume) ⑾ Since appropriate temperature helps the speed of chemical reactions, the construction period will be selected in May and June when the temperature is higher.
(Chongqing Volume) ⑿ It is believed that the key factor of team effectiveness is not just the simple sum of individual contributions, but the teamwork skills that enable team members to act in unison and cooperate with each other.
(Hunan Volume) Brief analysis: 10. Misuse of the conjunction "和", change it to the preposition "pair"; 10. Abuse of prepositions leads to incomplete subject, delete "because"; 10. Correlative words used in pairs do not echo before and after, replace "but"
” to “and including”.
Sixth, look at special sentence patterns: special sentence patterns such as "ba" sentences, passive sentences, and "is" sentences are prone to improper word order, improper collocation, and incompleteness in usage and collocation. ⒀ These accidents have caused heavy losses to people's lives and property.
The main reason is that some leaders and management departments do not pay high attention to production safety.
(Chongqing Volume) ⒁ This time-honored food factory is not large in scale, but it is very particular about the selection of ingredients to processing and production. The food it produces has always been highly trusted by new and old customers.
(National Volume Ⅰ) Brief Analysis Brief Analysis ⒀ is a mixture of two independent sets of verb-object structures, with the word "caused" deleted.
⒁The passive sentence is misused. It means that the product is highly trusted, but it cannot be said that customers are highly trusted. Change it to "Food has always been trusted by new and old customers."