On May 13, 2018, I wrote an article about ancient poetry in "You in My Eyes", which was about my "love" with ancient poetry. During that time, he and I were like each other, and we couldn't eat or sleep well, which seriously affected our rest. In the end, we had to bear the pain and "break up" with him.
Perhaps, it is my "lover" in this life, and I owe it. Now, I have become a lover of ancient poetry in the Word Home, and I also call myself a student of Teacher Nalan Huiruo (hereinafter referred to as Teacher Huiruo). I once again accepted ancient poetry and threw it into my arms.
Take a look, what happened in our "love" this time?
Strongness and sincerity are unparalleled, and you will succeed in the end. Finally succeed. With a loyal heart, she is a heroine.
Holding a book changes the appearance of the universe and steps towards neon. Cross over to neon. The gongs and drums were noisy, and the school building was draped in red.
When I saw the assignment for this poem, I didn’t feel anything at all. Later, when I read the post about picking mulberry seeds posted by Teacher Ai Si, she suddenly had inspiration, and her brain was filled with excitement. She followed the example of Teacher Zhang Guimei. I wrote down the outstanding deeds of the girls’ high school, not to mention how happy I was, as if I had found the sweet feeling of first love in life, and I was full of confidence. However, when I sent the homework to the Wenjia communication group, I was slapped in the head by teacher Hui Ruo, which made me sad all night. . So, I secretly decided to use some snacks when writing the second poem.
By learning to write this poem, I understood that picking mulberry seeds has forty-eight characters in double tone, four sentences in the front and back paragraphs, two flat rhymes, and one stacked rhyme.
Red leaves and yellow leaves. Change into autumn clothes. The clothes are wide and the shadow stands in the boudoir.
Do you know that I am hesitant?
Looking back and thinking in vain, leaving others heartbroken. What's the point of toasting?
A drop of blue tears hurts.
When I wrote this poem, I happened to visit my deceased mother. I returned to my mother’s home and sat in the house before I got married. I thought of the good times last autumn when my mother was still alive, but she has passed away this year. The building was empty, and sadness surged in my heart. After the theme is decided, we start to write and then check the rhythm, then replace the words that do not meet the rhythm, and finally, combine the mood and artistic conception at the time.
When people are under pressure, they are motivated. This time I handed in the homework and passed it in one go. With this joyful mood, my love for ancient poetry is getting closer step by step.
By learning to write this poem, I understand that Butterfly belongs to Xiaoling with flat rhyme, double tones and four crosses. The first four sentences have four flat rhymes, and the last four sentences have three flat rhymes.
She has shy cheeks and a pink face, and she is dressed in plain clothes and gleams under the lamp.
Tingxuan quietly purified his heart, and his passion made you look back.
Light the incense and move to meditate. The pale moon is bright, and the curtain shadows are floating.
Standing on the tower in the bitter wind and rain, the gongs are noisy. Happy to be exposed.
With a shy face and a pink face, she is dressed in plain clothes and dazzles under the lamp.
Tingxuan quietly describes her heart, her love is so intense that it makes you look back.
Light the incense and move to meditate. In my dream, the shadows on the curtain were floating.
Standing on the tower in the algae wind and apricot rain, the gongs are noisy. Happy to be exposed.
When I was writing this poem, I somehow remembered the scene where I listened to the Huangmei Opera "The Consort" with my mother and left home to save Li Lang, who was named the top pick on the imperial list. It is better to write it out according to the steps of doing homework before, and then have Teacher Huiruo modify the words and logical relationships. It is perfect.
By learning to write this poem, I understand that Yulanqian is a double tone with fifty-six characters, four sentences each in the front and back paragraphs, three oblique rhymes, and no matter what the content of the article is, there should be a sequence Sequence and logical relationships.
The inscription is dried on the corner of the desk, what will happen tonight?
Quietly standing in front of the rain for a long time, reading the book and feeling sleepy early, and typing the words in a dull tone.
Under the little lotus lamp, melancholy is added, and the extravagance is still empty joy.
A sigh disturbs the heartstrings, the frown is frowning, and I am speechless to fill in the words.
It was really difficult to create this poem. It took me a week to come up with it.
The main reason was that I couldn’t decide on a topic and couldn’t find what to write about. When it was time to hand in my homework, I was so anxious that I felt like an ant on a hot pot. Until the day before Sunday, I patted my head and put away the feeling of not being able to write lyrics. When the theme is written, then the written ancient words are revised and revised to complete the draft.
By learning to write this poem, I understood that Linjiangxian has fifty-eight characters in double tone, five sentences in the front and back, and three flat rhymes.
The light fragrance is silent and the spring breeze is lingering. Arouse public admiration and frequent appreciation of appearance.
She has willow eyebrows and almond-shaped eyes, and looks good in the mirror. The beautiful shadows are sent and the flowers are smiling.
If you are too lazy to put on your morning makeup, you will be troubled. Sigh, sigh, feeling hurt and proud.
Thousands of plum blossoms can be reached within a few lifetimes. Suffering, adding trouble to nothing
The light fragrance is silent, the spring breeze smiles. His appearance attracts admiration and squinting glances.
She has willow eyebrows and almond-shaped eyes, and looks good in the mirror. Beautiful shadows, surrounded by flowers.
If you are too lazy to put on your morning makeup, you will be troubled. Sigh, sigh, be sad.
Thousands of plum blossoms can be reached within a few lifetimes. Suffering and suffering add to the annoyance.
This is the most difficult poem to write, and there is no way to start. The whole week was spent in a state of boredom. Teacher Hui Ruo could just write about lyrical or romantic content in the group. I accidentally saw a picture that inspired me. The theme is about the beautiful woman in the picture and the emotions that arose in her heart after falling out of love. After 4 days of thinking, I posted the homework and pictures to the group on Saturday night. At first, the second part of this poem was about hard work. After I posted it to the Wenjiajia communication group, I felt it was inappropriate and changed it to hard work. Finally, after teacher Hui Ruo revised it, the logic and words were very smooth.
By learning to write this poem, I understand that Anhong belongs to the six-character double tone, with six sentences in the front and back sections and four oblique rhymes. I also understand the antithesis, and at the same time, I need to learn more example words.
As far as the eye can see at dusk, the moon in Toad Palace shines on the clouds.
Friends gathered in the courtyard to enjoy some wine, and sang and played the six strings at the banquet. Another year of joy.
The wind is cool and sparse in the osmanthus shadow, and the autumn moon in the world is long and round.
Don’t talk about trivial matters tonight, thousands of families are smiling. The whole country is safe.
The wind is cool and sparse in the osmanthus shadow, and the moon shines on the clouds in the Toad Palace.
Friends gathered in the courtyard to enjoy some wine, and sang and played the six strings at the banquet. Another year of joy.
The peaches on the sea are easy to ripen, and the autumn moon in the world is full.
Don’t talk about trivial matters tonight, thousands of families are smiling. The whole country is safe.
The osmanthus shadow is swaying coolly in the wind, and the moonlight in the Toad Palace is cheerful.
Friends gathered in the courtyard to enjoy some wine, and sang and played the six strings at the banquet. Here’s to another year of singing.
The peaches on the sea are gradually ripening, and the autumn moon in the world is full.
Don’t talk about trivial matters tonight, thousands of households are smiling. The whole country is safe.
The osmanthus shadow is swaying coolly in the wind, and the moonlight in the Toad Palace is cheerful.
Friends gathered in the courtyard to enjoy some wine, and sang and played the six strings at the banquet. Another prosperous year.
The peaches on the sea are gradually ripening, and the autumn moon in the world is full.
Don’t talk about trivial matters tonight, thousands of households are smiling. The whole country is safe.
The theme of this poem’s assignment is the month. At first glance, you can tell that it is about the Mid-Autumn Festival. In fact, every time I think about a theme, there will be deviations when I actually write it. The theme of this poem is about my family in the first part and my country in the second part. During the 2020 COVID-19 epidemic, without the country’s correct protective measures and the rescue of medical staff, how could our family be stable, how could we have the reunion of this year’s Mid-Autumn Festival and the harvest of autumn.
The first draft is completed. The rhythm of the original words is consistent, but the six words in the upper part and the second part are not in harmony (teacher Jialan Qingyu pointed out the error). The original words are revised and the six words in the second part are in harmony. The six-character antithesis is not correct. Please ask for help. Teacher Huiruo revised the original poem for the first time and then put it into the six-character antithesis. The second time Teacher Huiruo revised it was to fine-tune individual words of the poem. This poem has been revised three times in total.
By learning to write this poem, I understood that Po Zhenzi has sixty-two characters in double tone, five sentences each in the front and back paragraphs, and three flat rhymes.
From August 7th to September 19th, I have been studying ancient poetry writing in Literary Home for nearly a month and a half, and wrote eight poems in one day.
He said with his heart to the ancient poem: You disturb my sleep and body again, making me happy and worried, and I can't extricate myself. Because I like it, I am willing to do it.
I am very grateful to Word Home and teacher Hui Ruo for making me fall in love with ancient poetry again. Of course, I also like the learning atmosphere in Word Home where poetry friends help each other.
As a classic of Chinese culture, I like that it tastes bitter like tea, but has a long aftertaste. At the same time, there are small bridges and flowing water, which are smooth and melodious.
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