To modify a sick sentence is to modify a sentence with obvious ill-chosen words without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so as to make the sentence fluent, correct and more perfect. What are the error types of common sick sentences? The following are the error types of common sick sentences that I have sorted out. Welcome to appreciate that the error type 1 of common sick sentences is incomplete: for example: I have done a lot of good things for the class. ? It is not clear who has done many good deeds.

(2) improper use of words: for example: He does things calmly and arbitrarily. ? Arbitrary? It is a derogatory term, which should be changed to? Decisive? .

(3) improper collocation of words: for example: At the get-together, we heard sweet songs and beautiful dances. ? Hear that? With? Beautiful dance? Obviously can't match, it should be changed to? At the get-together, we heard sweet songs and saw beautiful dances. ?

(4) The word order is reversed. Chinese is very interested in me. ? Chinese? And? Me? The position of is reversed and should be changed to? I am very interested in Chinese. ?

(5) Inconsistency: For example? I guess he must have made a mistake in this question. ? The first half of the sentence is not sure enough, and the second half is sure that he is wrong, so there is a contradiction. What is the situation? Make people unclear. Can it be changed to? I guess he made a mistake in this problem. ? Or? I concluded that he had done the problem wrong. ?

[6] repetitive: for example? He rushed into the classroom and happily announced the good news of going for a spring outing tomorrow. ? In the sentence? Excited? And? Cheerful? They all show that he is happy, but one of them can be deleted.

⑺ illogical and unreasonable: for example: When the rice is ripe, the fields are green and there is a scene of bumper harvest. ? Rice is golden yellow when it is ripe, but it is unreasonable to describe it as green in this sentence.

(8) The concept is unclear: such as? The Great Wall in Wan Li, the Palace Museum and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for. ? Here? Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge? Don't belong? Monument? The concept of ownership is unclear and should be changed to? The Great Wall of Wan Li and the Palace Museum are historical sites that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for. ?

(9) unclear reference: such as? Huang Hong and Zhao Yan went to Dengxianlou Mountain together. She climbed faster than her, and she climbed to the top of Xianlou Mountain first. ? In the sentence? She? There are two. Is it Huang Hong who climbs fast or Zhao Yan who climbs fast? The reference is unknown Instead, she climbed fast, and she climbed to the top of Xianlou Mountain first. ? Or Huang Hong climbed faster than her, and Huang Hong climbed the peak of Xianlou Mountain first. ?

(1) Misuse of related words, such as? Not only is Huangshan a beautiful place, but I really want to visit it. ? This sentence does not constitute a progressive relationship but a causal relationship. Therefore, it is necessary to put related words? Not only? And change it to? Because? So; Another example? You can get good grades only if you study hard. ? In the sentence Only? Improper collocation of related words should be changed to? Only? Only. Type 2

1 ()

A. An excellent basketball coach with more than 2 years' teaching experience from the national team came.

B, in the construction of new China, they are exerting their infinite hidden strength.

C. There are all kinds of things that Lenin used to use.

D, whether this kind of seed should be changed has caused extensive discussion among leaders and the masses.

2 ()

A. When we came to this world-famous museum, we were proud of the dazzling array of art treasures.

B, the strong and fast rhythm of rock music and the flickering lighting effect make people see things in a blur.

C, if there is something wrong with the ideas in an article, then even if the writing is very good, it is unacceptable.

D. Only by strengthening antagonistic training can China's football go global, or even Asia can't rush out.

3 ()

A, China's cotton production was not self-sufficient in the past.

B, I think this reply and the investigation and handling of this issue show an irresponsible attitude.

C. Before liberation, the money earned by my father and brother was not enough to support the family.

D. We don't completely deny that this poem doesn't reveal hope, but that this hope is very slim.

4 ()

A. On October 11th, with the idea of learning from the aviation department, our blackboard newspaper was also published.

B, besides the tickets issued, members' family members must also have family badges, and if either of them is missing, they cannot enter.

C, it can be seen how weak the attitude of being responsible for the concern of the working class is.

D, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched recently, and a series of work such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system should be completed in this campaign.

5 ()

A. Now the fishermen have elected their own administrative team leader, who is responsible for mastering the management of fishermen's life and production.

B. It has been ten years since Lao Zhang died.

C. The People's Republic of China was established, and the program was promulgated, so that women are equal in law.

Mr. D and Mr. Kan Kan talked about it. Although his voice, face and smile have not changed much, the wrinkles around his eyes seem to imply the hardships and unhappiness of these years.

6 ()

A. Only by keeping close contact with the society and the masses can we put forward insightful opinions on national security and people's worries.

B, the phrase "You can recite poems even if you are familiar with 3 Tang poems" is applicable to writing poems, and it is also applicable to those who are literary.

C, the dispute over right and wrong on scientific issues should not be subdued, especially things like literary inquisition. All those who have done this in history have never had a good result.

D. When driving through this place, he found a sign with red letters on it, which looked illegible.

7 ()

A. The Physician Law clearly stipulates that registered doctors in many countries and regions in the world must join local medical associations.

B, using the theory and method of social science to study the Internet is a new topic faced by social science workers.

C, the plaque style is vulgar and grotesque, although it is indecent; Worshipping foreign things and obsessing over foreign countries is full of colonial culture, and it is also shameful for Chinese people.

D. China's national debt issuance this year is more than 1952 billion yuan.

8 ()

A. The filter developed by Transportation Research Institute can purify low-grade diesel exhaust gas, which has contributed to environmental protection.

B, in order to implement the Teachers Law, Wanshou County has reimbursed all the medical expenses owed to teachers on the eve of March 8th.

C, the director of the wood processing factory reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the equipment of the factory, and mobilized employees to learn how to use the new equipment, thus launching a series of new products.

D. Shops openly sell pirated software. We must crack down on this kind of trampling on the publishing law.

9 ()

A. Since the people of China accepted Marxism, the revolution in China has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.

B, we should reform and improve the new scientific and technological system that conforms to the objective laws of scientific and technological development and adapts to the socialist market economy.

C, in September this year, two young people under the age of 3 of Xihu Dali were promoted to the important positions of executive vice presidents of knitting branch and garment branch, which means that Xihu Dali began to implement its awareness of quick half-racket in the cultivation of human resources.

D. One hundred years ago, a 57-year-old stubborn single old man who could still hear thunder but couldn't hear a large symphony orchestra playing his own music raised his fist to the roaring sky for the last time, and then passed away.

1 ()

A, those senators who open their mouths to "human rights" and keep their mouths shut to "human rights", may I ask what kind of "human rights" the white police in the United States have imposed on blacks?

B, mountaineering clubs in Austria are all over the country. It has 25, members and pays a certain membership fee according to their annual economic income.

C. At present, the most fundamental problem facing China's economy is still insufficient demand. Proceeding from this macroeconomic situation, it is still necessary to continue to implement a proactive fiscal policy to promote economic restructuring and accelerate infrastructure construction, including promoting the development of the western region.

in the past ten years, the number of books published in a year has more than doubled, while the total number of printed books is basically the same, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.

11 ()

A. In recent three years, the total grain output of this county has been increasing at an average annual rate of 2%, making great strides forward.

B. The source of river water is not only groundwater, but also rainwater.

C, Huai Su's unrestrained, Badashan people's character is the pride of the Han nationality, but Van Gogh's passion and Matisse's rhythm have long been dumped by the people of China.

D. The national conference on the preparation of enrollment plan for colleges and universities was held recently in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, this year, the enrollment plan of colleges and universities affiliated to the central government for the western region and ethnic minority areas will increase, and the admission rate of college entrance examinations in all provinces, autonomous regions and municipalities directly under the central government will exceed 3%.

12 ()

A. This is the mother of a hero, a mother with an open mind.

B. The article analyzes the strategic characteristics adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.

C. Cigarette smuggling is rampant, and China's customs has made cracking down on cigarette smuggling a priority.

D. The limitations of the author's own time and class cannot but be reflected in his works, which is a problem that we must pay attention to when evaluating ancient literary works.

13 ()

A. Modern people can't refuse the temptation of surfing the Internet, but the expensive online consumption makes netizens feel heartache.

B. Recently, it was confirmed by the relevant departments that the freshmen of senior high schools in China who entered school in September 2 will no longer use the current Chinese textbooks for senior high schools that have been used for 2 years. According to their own situation, middle schools around the country can decide to choose one of the two new textbooks, the Experimental Chinese Book for Senior High School and the Experimental Chinese Textbook for Senior High School, which are compiled by People's Education Publishing House.

C, we should overcome the tendency of focusing only on tourism development and neglecting the protection of tourism resources, and take practical measures to do a good job in the protection of river embankments.

D. According to statistics, there are at least 2 million paulownia plants in Henan Province, and the intercropping area between agriculture and paulownia has increased to more than 1 million mu.

14 ()

A, Tsinghua University adopts the online test method, which allows candidates to "talk freely" with professors online, and then many professors vote for recommendation, and finally the school decides whether to accept them.

B. If China wants to join the WTO and participate in international competition, it is urgent to properly manage the protection of intellectual property rights and the enforcement of trademark law.

C, creating a breach at the Garden Mouth in Zhengzhou, directly inundating more than 6.19 million people in 13 counties in Henan and Anhui provinces.

D. Lu Xun attached great importance to children's literary creation. He pointed out that the fate of children is the fate of the future.

15 ()

A, this station will broadcast a TV speech on safety production by the director of the State Work Safety Committee at noon today.

B. His parents are both middle school teachers, and his mother teaches in Xixiang No.1 Middle School, his alma mater. This time, she also came to Beijing as a representative of the school.

C. The target of this magazine is mainly Chinese teachers and other Chinese workers in middle schools.

D, looking down at the flute, I saw a young man sitting by the lake playing the flute, which sounded so sad.

16 ()

A. Who can deny that the quality of a hero is gradually cultivated through hard study day by day?

B, at the beginning of the Gulf War, Iraq confused the reconnaissance effect of the planes and reconnaissance satellites of the multinational forces by setting a large number of false targets, and finally some planes were kept.

C, he didn't tell the other side the date of the game as decided by the student union, which led to misunderstanding.

D. I remember that when I met him, I was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.

17 ()

A. Macao has been drifting away from the motherland for 4 years. Can it be denied that Macao's return to the motherland is not the same wish of every Chinese?

B, farmers along the river have consciously expanded the area of green manure in order to improve soil fertility and ensure the increase of grain production in the coming year.

C, since last autumn, great achievements have been made in banning and publicizing the felling and trafficking of trees in the upper reaches of the Yangtze River.

the \ "medical green channel \" established by D, Beijing Health Messenger Company and 1 hospitals is a brand-new mechanism for seeking medical treatment quickly.

18 ()

A. I don't think anyone can deny that this play has certain negative effects.

B. Zhang Xiangdong and his son are both teachers. He said, "It is my father's spirit of loving teaching and being dedicated to work that inspired me to take the stage."

C. He was very angry when he found that he bought a "parallel" shirt, so he called a taxi back.

D. He didn't listen to the tutor's suggestion and revised the viewpoint of the paper, which affected the level of the paper.

19 ()

A. After rectification, the order inside and outside the venue has obviously improved, and the audience is no longer crowded with each other.

B, the economic loss caused by this accident is serious. According to conservative estimates of relevant people, the direct loss is at least 6 million yuan.

C, the China swimming team participating in the Asian Games is composed of 12 outstanding players selected from 2 training players.

D, if the U.S. government fails to fulfill its obligations in the Sino-U.S. trade agreement, the multi-fiber goods agreement and the textile agreement, it is hard for anyone to predict that the trade between China and the United States will not reverse.

2 ()

A. NATO's indiscriminate bombing of Yugoslavia has set a precedent for digging its own grave in the history of international relations.

B, from ancient times to the present, everything that has achieved career and made a difference to mankind is the result of down-to-earth and hard work.

C. It is not easy to collect historical materials, and it is even more difficult to identify and use historical materials. Most historians in China used this as their main strength.

D. The \ "Golden Jade Clothes \" unearthed in China by Liu Sheng, the King of Zhongshan Jing in the Western Han Dynasty, was publicly exhibited in the Palace Museum in the New Year.