Modify the wrong sentences, one to ten questions, (including answers)
01
No matter the weather is very hot, everyone still insists on exercising.
The answer is below.
02
, The task assigned to me by the company commander has been successfully implemented.
03
After education, the victims of "FxG" opened their eyes and increased their awareness.
04
Students must abide by traffic rules to prevent accidents.
05
During class, Xiaohua stared at the teacher intently.
06
I bought pens, rulers, erasers and stationery and hurried home.
07
No matter how good you are at studying, there is no reason to be proud.
08
, Martha wears a blue windbreaker and a yellow hat.
09
Tonight, the moon is as full as a mirror and the sky is full of stars. What a beautiful night scene!
10
The square was crowded with countless people.
Answers
1. Change "irrespective" to "even though" 2. Change "implement" to complete
3. "Let" what happens to the victim
4. "Prevent" conflicts with "Don't", remove one. 5. "Not blinking" means "watch", remove one. 6. "Change" and "to "wait"
7. "Although... but" is changed to "Even..." 8. "And" is changed to "wearing"
9. "The sky is full of stars" is changed to "The moon is bright and the stars are sparse", Scientific knowledge. 10. Choose between "many, many" and "countless"
1. Methods of modifying incorrect sentences
(1) Improper word choice
① Feelings *** Improper color. For example: His serious and hard-working spirit of study is worthy of emulation by each of our classmates. ("Xiaoyou' means "to learn from the bad", which is a derogatory meaning. It is inappropriate to use it here and should be changed to "study".)
②The related words are used incorrectly. For example: As long as you insist on checking, you will (When "only" and "cai" are used together, "jiu" should be changed to "cai".)
(2) Improper collocation
① Subject and predicate. Inappropriate matching. For example: His lofty revolutionary qualities often appear in my mind ("quality" cannot be "revealed", but can be changed to "his great revolutionary image")
② Improper matching of object and object. For example: Shanghai Science and Technology Development Center has gathered a group of professional teams who are enthusiastic about scientific and technological development and are good at management. (The "gathering" should be "professional talents".)
⑧Inappropriate matching of subject and object. For example: This last day of labor is the most stressful, enjoyable and meaningful day for the students ("labor" and "day" are not properly matched, so "labor" should be deleted.)
④The rhetorical word does not match the central word. For example: He has spent a lot of effort in cultivating fine seeds ("a lot" does not match "hard work" and should be changed to "a lot".)
(3) Incomplete ingredients
① Lack of subject. For example: By studying Lei Feng’s touching deeds, I understand many principles of life (the word "make" makes "I" disappear. The function of the subject is eliminated, so it should be deleted. )
②The object is missing. For example: When I saw his photo, I remembered that we played together and read this sentence together. The object center word is missing. "Situation" should be added.)
(4) Improper word order
①Improper logical word order. For example: the school has adopted and studied new rules and regulations. (The order of "pass" and "research" is reversed. It should be "research" first and then "pass".)
②The order of related words is inappropriate. For example: A: Not only do I trust him, but I also trust his friends.
B: Not only do I trust him, but people who opposed him before also trust him now. (When the two clauses have the same subject, the related word comes after the subject.
For example, in Example A, the subject of both clauses is "I", and "not only" should be after the subject "I": when the subjects of the two clauses are different, the related words should be in front of the subject. For example, in Example B, the subjects of the two clauses are "I" and "人" respectively, and the related word "not only" should be placed in front of "I". )
(5) Inconsistency
① Inconsistency. For example: Being able to study hard is the key to improving academic performance. ("Can" and "Can't" express two completely different situations, so "Can" should be deleted.)
② Negation is redundant. For example, some doctors do not adhere to medical ethics and ask for red envelopes. The hospital leaders are not irresponsible for this. ("Not without responsibility" means responsible. Adding "not" contradicts the meaning. "Not" should be removed or "not" should be removed.)
⑧The scope is unclear. For example, as soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see that all the pictures and posters about the history of Macao are hung on the walls of the corridor. ("Pictures" include "propaganda posters", which should not be juxtaposed and should be said as "propaganda posters and other pictures".)
(6) Repeated and wordy words: The overload of schoolwork for primary and secondary school students is a fundamental problem that plagues our country A persistent disease of education. ("Sick disease" and "disease" are repeated, one of them should be deleted)
(7) The meaning is unclear (ambiguity). For example: the shepherd boy is holding the cow and eating grass. (Whether it is "the shepherd boy eating grass" or "the cow eating grass": it should be changed to "the shepherd boy is holding the cow, and the cow is eating grass.")
2. After knowing these basic types of sick sentences, we It is necessary to master the basic methods of modifying incorrect sentences.
(1) Check the faulty sentences and determine the reasons. Read the original sentence first to see where the problem lies. There are different correction requirements for errors in grammar, rhetoric, and logic. Finding out the cause of the disease is the prerequisite for modifying the diseased sentences.
(2) Treat first, then second, and prescribe the right medicine. If it is a defective sentence caused by grammatical errors, when revising, you must first find out the main body of the sentence (subject, predicate, object) to see if it is incomplete, whether the collocation is appropriate, whether the structure is confusing, and correct the errors found: and then check again Additional components (definitive, adverbial, complement), correct misused words, reversed word order, or additional components that do not match the central phrase one by one.
(3) Modification of a faulty sentence should be done without changing the original meaning of the sentence, using the following methods: add (add words), delete (delete redundant words and phrases), adjust (adjust the order of words), Change (replace other words). You cannot create new sentences. Modify incorrect sentence exercises (answers are required)
1. Last year, my country’s oil output was one of the countries with the largest oil output in the world.
2. When we engage in the construction of the four modernizations, we need to inherit and carry forward the fine tradition of hard work.
3. In the middle of the night, thunder suddenly rumbled, followed by lightning.
4. Rice is an important production area in Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces.
5. In a short time, we cleaned several unclean places.
6. Currently, it is the golden season in Beijing, and tourists from all over the world are coming in droves.
7. Teacher Wang is very kind to us and always speaks sweetly.
8. Beneficial birds such as swallows, woodpeckers and frogs specialize in eating pests and are good friends of humans.
In September, theaters in Beijing are preparing to screen more than 70 new films from ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad.
10. Our teacher is very eloquent and can talk nonsense.
11. The Party Central Committee attaches great importance to and supports the development of scientific undertakings.
12. Every student should become a worker in moral education, intellectual education, and sports.
13. Today is my little cousin’s fifth birthday.
14. His illegal behavior has been criticized by everyone.
15. Lanlan’s spirit of helping others is worthy of everyone’s touching
16. The students listened to the teacher’s lectures with great concentration
17. The members of the Hero Model Group Comrade reported to all our classmates
18. Interest groups in two schools started activities yesterday
19. It was not until the second half of the 19th century that coral was discovered It is a carnivore that lives in the sea
20. On the first day of the opening of the exhibition, many people including workers, farmers, soldiers, students and women came to participate.
21. When the Eight-Power Allied Forces invaded our country, they burned and looted the Old Summer Palace in the western suburbs of Beijing.
22. Wang Ping and Li Hua established a profound friendship
23. During labor, teachers and college students did heavy work, while female classmates did light work
24 .Recalling his own growth, every step is inseparable from the cultivation of the "gardener"
25. After hard work, Xiaodong's sloppy problem solving has improved than before
26. Learning Various laws are one of the important issues at present
27. Air, like other things, also has the characteristics of thermal expansion and contraction.
Answer
1. Last year, our country was one of the countries with the largest oil exports in the world.
2. When we engage in the construction of the four modernizations, we need to inherit and carry forward the fine tradition of hard work.
3. In the middle of the night, lightning suddenly flashed, followed by thunder.
4. Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces are important rice producing areas.
5. In a short time, we cleaned up several unclean places.
6. Currently, it is the golden season in Beijing, and there is an endless stream of tourists from all over the world.
7. Teacher Wang is very kind to us and always speaks softly.
8. Swallows, woodpeckers and other beneficial birds and frogs specialize in eating pests and are good friends of mankind.
In September, theaters in Beijing are preparing to release more than 70 new films reflecting ancient and modern Chinese and foreign content.
10. Our teacher is very eloquent and speaks clearly and logically.
11. The Party Central Committee attaches great importance to and vigorously supports the development of scientific undertakings.
12. Every student should become a worker for all-round development of moral education, intellectual education, and sports.
13. Today is my little cousin’s fifth birthday.
14. His erroneous behavior that violated discipline was criticized by everyone.
15. Lanlan’s spirit of helping others is worth learning from.
16. The students listened attentively to the teacher's lecture.
17. The comrades of the Hero Model Group gave a report to all our classmates.
18. Two interest groups in the school started activities yesterday.
19. It was not until the second half of the 19th century that corals were discovered to be predators living in the sea.
20. On the opening day of the exhibition, many people including workers, farmers, soldiers and students came to participate.
21. When the Eight-Power Allied Forces invaded our country, they looted and burned the Old Summer Palace in the western suburbs of Beijing.
22. Wang Ping and Li Hua established a profound friendship.
23. During labor, the teacher and male classmates do heavy work, while female classmates do light work.
24. Looking back on my own growth process, every step is inseparable from the cultivation of a "gardener".
25. After hard work, Xiaodong’s sloppy problem solving has changed.
26. Learning various laws is one of the important tasks at present.
27. Air, like other substances, also has the characteristics of thermal expansion and contraction. Modify the first-grade exercise questions of sick sentences (with answers)
1. He officially retired from his sports career after the sports meeting.
2. I think this should not need to be described, no one can imagine it.
3. Various things that Lenin used in the past are displayed here.
4. Regarding the artistic quality of the blackboard newspaper, the class committee should pay attention to it.
Answer:
1. He officially quit after the sports meeting Sports.
2. I think this should not need to be described, no one can imagine it.
3. Various things used by Lenin are displayed here.
4. Regarding the artistic quality of the blackboard newspaper, the class committee should pay attention to it.
1. Matching of object and object
1. The fundamental purpose of developing productive forces in socialist countries is to improve people’s living standards.
(Improve)
2. The article fully reveals the noble mind of the protagonist through the description of those ordinary but life-filled details.
3A small house stands outside the city.
4 veteran workers assisted the traffic police in maintaining traffic order on the road.
5 This year, our teacher Wang was honored to be awarded the title of "Advanced Class Teacher in the City".
6 Realizing the development of the western region is an arduous historical task.
7 In order to write this report, we investigated many Lao Yang’s deeds.
8. With the teacher’s education and the help of his classmates, his learning attitude has improved significantly.
2. Consistency
1 The level of composition is one of the important indicators of a person's language ability.
2. Having a solid knowledge base is the prerequisite for further study.
3 Dare to move towards the pinnacle of world film art is the key for Chinese films to go global.
3. Double Negation
1. In order to prevent traffic accidents from happening in the future, you must carefully sum up your experiences and lessons and work hard to learn driving skills.
2 In order to avoid similar mistakes from happening in the future, we must strictly abide by discipline.
3. Do not watch directly with your eyes when watching the solar eclipse to avoid burning your eyes.
4. Young Subject
1 Through hard training, athletes can achieve excellent results in the Olympic Games.
2. With the help of teachers and classmates, his grades improved rapidly.
3 Since there were no accidents during this autumn outing, the teachers and students were very pleased.
4 I remember that when I met him, he was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.
5. Logical sequence of verbs
1. We must continuously improve and cultivate our ability to discover, analyze and solve problems.
2 The teacher adopted and solicited the students’ opinions on how to further run the literary club.
3 We approved and discussed the squadron plan.
6. Related words
1 As long as you exercise regularly, you will continue to enhance your physical fitness.
2 Even though Japan has repeatedly whitewashed its acts of aggression, it cannot conceal the historical truth.
3. I exercise long-distance running every day. Although I have made great progress, I am no longer afraid of participating in the 800-meter race at the sports meeting.
4. Not only can he read English prose fluently, but he can also pronounce it accurately.
7. Inconsistency
1 It took me about two hours to complete these math problems.
2I guess he must be a sixth grader.
8. Adverbials
1 We successfully found the hunter in the mountains according to the sketch drawn by Lao Gaotou.
2 swimmers broke world records again and again.
3 Many teachers in the lounge had enthusiastic conversations with him yesterday.
9. Attributive
1 Reading more and writing more is still a good way to learn Chinese.
2 He was one of the many victims who survived.
3 Nostalgia is a song that can never be finished.
10. Sentence patterns are mixed and components are missing
1 From the day he went to school, he had a strong interest in Chinese.
2. The origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival. The story of "Chang'e flying to the moon" has been widely circulated among the people since ancient times, which is one of its causes.
3. We came to the Military Museum and saw so many advanced military equipment, which made people so proud.
4 Xiaoliang’s shoulders were weighed down by the heavy rice bag and he was suffocated.
5 Sauce duck, ham, Dongpo pork, etc. are very popular New Year foods among Hangzhou people.
6March is the season of spring flowers blooming by the Slender West Lake.
7. Guide students to read classics and write and perform textbooks and plays, which have certain positive effects on the development of personality.
Answer: Do the rest by yourself. If you don’t understand, you can deepen the impression by asking the teacher.
2. Reveal - Show
3. Stand - Stand
p>4 Maintain - maintain
5 Remove the "title"
6 The implementation of the Western Development is an arduous task
7 Many deeds of Lao Yang
8 Improvement - improvement or he corrected his learning attitude. Answers should be found when revising incorrect sentences in fifth grade
Wrong: The changes between the old and new societies are so great!
Correct: The changes between the old and new societies are so great!
Wrong: I guess he must have done this question wrong.
Correct : I guess he got this question wrong:
Wrong: The author of "The Morning Blossoms Plucked at Dusk" was written by Lu Xun.
Correct: <
Wrong: After watching this TV series, I was deeply impressed.
Correct: After watching this TV series, we were all deeply impressed.
Wrong: Huang Jiguang not only died heroically, but he will always live in our hearts.
Correct: Although Huang Jiguang died heroically, he will always live in our hearts.
Modify the answer to the wrong sentence
1. Yesterday, the students took bread, eggs, apples, instant noodles and other food to the countryside for an outing.
2. There is not much time left before the exam, so we need to review more intensively.
3. During class, we should pay attention to the lecture at all times.
Select one of the following groups of sentences that has a clear meaning and no grammatical errors. And make modifications
1 ( )
A. An excellent basketball coach from the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience is here.
B. In the construction of New China, they exert their infinite power.
C. Various things used by Lenin in the past are displayed inside.
D. Whether or not these seeds should be replaced has aroused widespread discussion among leaders and the masses.
2 ( )
A. We came to this world-famous museum and saw a dazzling array of art treasures, all of which make people feel proud.
B. The strong and fast rhythm of rock music and the blurry and flashing lighting effects are dazzling.
C. If the ideas in an article are problematic, then even if the writing is very good, it is still unacceptable.
D. Unless confrontational training is strengthened, Chinese football will be able to go global, otherwise it will not even be able to break out of Asia.
3 ( )
A. my country’s cotton production was not self-sufficient in the past.
B. I think this reply and the investigation and handling of this issue show an irresponsible attitude.
C. Before liberation, the money my father and brother earned was not enough to support the family.
D. We do not completely deny that this poem does not reveal hope, but that this hope is very slim.
4 ( )
A. On October 11, with the idea of ????learning from the Department of Aviation, our blackboard newspaper was also published.
B. In addition to the issued tickets, family members of members must also have family badges. If one of the two is missing, they will not be admitted.
C. It shows how weak the attitude towards the working class is.
D. Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched, in which a series of tasks such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system must be completed.
5 ( )
A. Now the fishermen themselves have elected the administrative team leader, who is responsible for controlling the fishermen’s life and production management.
B. It has been ten years since Lao Zhang passed away.
C. The People’s Republic of China was established, the Communist Party’s Program was promulgated, and women are legally equal.
Mr. D. was talking eloquently. Although his voice and smile had not changed much, the wrinkles at the corners of his eyes seemed to hint at the hardship and unhappiness of these years.
6 ( )
A. Only by having close contact with society and contacting the masses can we provide insightful opinions on national security and people's happiness and security.
B. "If you have read three hundred Tang poems by heart, you will be able to recite them even if you don't know how to recite them." This sentence is applicable to both poetry writing and writing.
C. In disputes about right and wrong on scientific issues, we should not adopt a persuasive approach, especially we should not engage in things like literary inquisition. In history, whenever this was done, there was no good result.
D. When driving past this place, he found a sign with red letters on one side. The handwriting seemed unclear.
7 ( )
A. The "Physician Law" clearly stipulates that registered doctors in many countries and regions around the world must join the local medical association.
B. Using social science theories and methods to study the Internet is a new topic faced by social scientists.
C. The style of the plaque is vulgar and grotesque, which is certainly indecent; its admiration for foreign countries has colonial cultural overtones and is also shameful to the Chinese people.
D. my country’s national debt issuance scale this year is more than 195.2 billion yuan.
8 ( )
A. The filter developed by the Transportation Research Institute that can purify low-grade diesel exhaust gas has made a contribution to environmental protection.
B. In order to implement the "Teacher Law", Wanshou County has reimbursed all medical expenses owed to teachers on the eve of March 8th Festival.
C. The director of the wood processing factory reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the factory's equipment, and mobilized employees to learn how to use the new equipment, thus launching a series of new products.
D. Stores blatantly sell pirated software. We must severely crack down on this violation of publishing laws.
9 ( )
A. Since the Chinese people accepted Marxism, the Chinese revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade ***.
B. We must reform and improve the new science and technology system that conforms to the objective laws of science and technology development and is compatible with the socialist market economy.
C. In September of this year, "West Lake Dali" had two young people under 30 years old promoted to the important position of executive vice president of the knitting branch and garment branch, which means that " "West Lake Dali" began to implement its awareness in the cultivation of human resources.
D. A hundred years ago, a stubborn fifty-seven-year-old single man who could still hear the thunder but could no longer hear the large symphony orchestra playing his own music raised his fist to the The roaring sky then passed away.
10 ( )
A. Those congressmen who talk about "human rights" but not "human rights", what exactly are the "human rights" that the white police in the United States enforce against black people?
B. Austrian mountaineering clubs are spread all over the country. It has 250,000 members, and members pay certain membership dues based on their annual economic income.
C. The most fundamental problem facing China’s economy is still insufficient demand. Starting from this macroeconomic status quo, it is still necessary to continue to implement active fiscal policies to promote economic structural adjustment and accelerate infrastructure construction, including promoting the development of the western region.
D. In the past ten years, the annual number of published books has more than doubled, while the total number of prints has remained basically the same, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.
11 ( )
A. In the past three years, the county's total grain output has made great strides forward at an average annual increase rate of 20%.
B. In addition to groundwater, rainwater is also one of the sources of river water.
C. Huaisu's unrestrained spirit and Bada Shanren's character are the pride of the Han nation. However, Van Gogh's passion and Matisse's rhythm have long been fascinated by the Chinese people.
D. The National General College Enrollment Student Source Planning Working Conference was recently held in Taiyuan, Shanxi.
According to the plan, the number of students from the central colleges and universities affiliated to the central government for the west and minority areas will increase this year, and the college entrance examination admission rate in all provinces, autonomous regions, and municipalities across the country will exceed 30%.
12 ( )
A. This is a heroic mother, a mother with an open mind.
B. The article analyzes the strategic characteristics adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.
C. Cigarette smuggling is very rampant, and my country’s customs has made cracking down on smuggled cigarettes a priority.
D. The limitations of the author's own era and class cannot but be reflected in his works. This is an issue that we must pay attention to when evaluating ancient literary works.
13 ( )
A. The temptation of surfing the Internet is irresistible to modern people, but the expensive online consumption makes Internet fans heartbroken.
B. It has recently been confirmed by relevant departments that my country’s high school freshmen who entered school in September 2000 will no longer use the current high school Chinese textbooks that have been in use for 20 years. Middle schools in various regions can decide on their own to choose one of the two new textbooks, "High School Chinese Experimental Textbook" and "High School Chinese Experimental Textbook" compiled by the People's Education Press based on their own circumstances.
C. It is necessary to overcome the tendency of only focusing on tourism development and not paying attention to the protection of tourism resources, and take practical measures to protect the river embankments.
D. According to statistics: there are at least 200 million paulownia trees planted in Henan Province, and the paulownia intercropping area has increased to more than 10 million acres.
14 ( )
A. Tsinghua University uses an online test, allowing candidates to "talk" with professors online, and then multiple professors vote for recommendations, and finally the school decides whether to Admission.
B. If China wants to join the WTO and participate in international competition, it urgently needs to protect intellectual property rights and enforce trademark laws.
C. Created a breach at Huayuankou in Zhengzhou, directly submerging more than 6.19 million people in 13 counties in Henan and Anhui provinces.
D. Lu Xun attached great importance to the literary and artistic creation of children. He pointed out: The destiny of children is the destiny of the future.
For reference only:
12. Change "serious" to "severe"
13. Change "and haircut" to "wait"
16. "Ying" is moved in front of "Bang"
17. He has thought about these questions for a long time.
18. Many patients have been treated by him.
19. With everyone’s help, I finally raised my awareness.
3 The wind blew down all the big trees yesterday. 4 Class 1 of the fifth grade is the class with the largest number of students in the school. 5 Everyone in our school participated in the activity of "Red Scarves from East and West Hand in Hand, Millions of Books to Send Love" 6 On this issue of principle, he was resolute and never gave in. 7 Under the teacher's education, he corrected his learning attitude and clarified the purpose of learning. 8. Teacher Liu was gloriously named "Model Class Teacher" 9 The teacher encouraged me to continue Work hard and achieve good results again10 He was wearing a gray shirt and a blue hat. 11. I especially like playing football and table tennis. 12. Grandma told me stories from the past.