On weekends, my mother took me to Wujiaochang for shopping. As soon as she entered the gate, she was attracted by a bag on her right hand side. Just then, I found a very beautiful sweater and told my mother gently. I walked over and saw the tag, which made my legs tremble. So expensive! I shouted. Although it was expensive, I fell in love with it at first sight. Mother asked me if I liked this dress very much. I definitely nodded at once. "Let's go and see what this material is. Mom will help you knit one." After reading it, my mother took me to the fourth floor and chose wool. She chose from left to right, and selected several kinds of cashmere wool in pink and other colors. "There is still a diamond missing." Mom chanted. Then he went into a diamond shop and picked a diamond that looked like it. I went back.
I saw my mother take two needles and four balls of wool, and began to weave around, keeping her eyes firmly fixed on the wool in her hand, for fear that it was knitted wrong there. Because this dress has many mixed colors, it was a bit troublesome. My mother had to bend over and change the wool every time, but she was not bored at all, but she was still absorbed in knitting. She sometimes sighed, "Hey-"as if she thought that her knitting was not good enough. Even at night, in order not to affect my sleep, my mother turned the light very dim, and knitted my sweater by herself in the dim light, stitch by stitch, missing a pattern. My mother had to tear it down and knit it again, as if she were completing some important task! These mornings, I always see my mother's tired figure and bloodshot eyes. She knits and knits at a flying speed, even if her hands are sore, she won't stop.
A few days later, when the sweater was finished, I saw a trademark "Warm Brand" on the clothes. I asked my mother why there was a trademark, and my mother answered me with four words: "It is warm". I smiled with relief, and so did my mother.
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