1. Composition "Timely Rain" 450 words (the end of writing about people)

Do you know Timely Rain? That time I really took a deep bath in the timely rain and experienced the feeling of being helped.

On Monday evening, the weather was muggy and hot. I didn’t bring any water with me in the morning, so I didn’t drink any water and my mouth was dry. I was packing my schoolbag weakly to go home.

"Lin Qidi, teacher, this bottle of milk is for you to drink." I was startled, and when I looked up, I saw the teacher handing me the milk with a smile on his face.

As soon as I touched the cold milk, I felt refreshed. Milk is like the cool breeze in hot summer, like the little sun in cold winter, what a timely rain! My mouth immediately started drooling.

Holding this can of milk, I seemed to be filled with strength instantly. Take a small sip and instantly the cool sweet liquid flows through every corner of your body, making you feel like you are in a fairyland.

After returning home, I remembered the delicious taste of milk. I drank several cans of milk in succession. It was strange. The taste was nothing special. It turns out that timely rain has no big or small, high or low. When a person needs help, giving him help in time is the most beautiful, precious and unique thing in the world.

Comments from famous teachers: The short article is very profound and detailed. From a "little thing", I realized that there is no high or low in things, only the word "timely" is the most rare. This also confirms that "it is easy to add icing on the cake, but it is difficult to provide charcoal in the snow." reason. The descriptive technique of the short article also reflects the principle of "seeing the big from the small".

Moreover, the short article is very expressive when it describes the teacher "giving help in times of need" and giving the young author a bottle of milk. The young author drank it all in one gulp, and the sweetness of the milk "flowed through every corner of the body". It is also very vivid, making people feel that this is really a bottle of "charcoal in the snow" milk. 2. Timely Rain Composition, 450 words, I want others to help me

Timely Rain

Friends are like a bonfire, bringing you warmth when it is cold; friends are like a An umbrella protects you from the wind and rain; a friend is like a "timely rain" that brings you nectar during drought...

I still remember that after the mid-term exam, my grades were unsightly. I was disappointed and didn’t know what to do. I couldn’t accept such a cruel reality. I lost my former lively side and began to become withdrawn and unwilling to interact with others. My sky seems to have lost its colorful colors. Just when I was at a loss, my best friend, Xiaohong, came over, pulled me and said, "Don't you think you have changed? You used to never be intimidated by failure. Could it be that this little Did this small setback defeat you? "I can help you!" "Yes, it will work!" Xiaohong's words restored my confidence. After that day, the two of us were inseparable. Every night, Xiaohong helps me review

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She stays very late, and sometimes she is scolded by her parents. I feel embarrassed, but Xiaohong is still stubborn. I was so moved that I burst into tears as I reviewed it with me. I asked her for help when I had questions I didn’t understand, but what about Xiaohong? He also patiently analyzed each question with me and explained it to me in detail. If you don’t understand it once, tell it a second time. If you don’t understand it the second time, tell it again until I understand it!

In the second exam, as expected, I achieved excellent results. I was very happy. At this moment, Xiaohong ran over and said, "How is it? I told you that you can do it!" We all laughed! This is the support my good friend Xiaohong gave me, which enabled me to achieve excellent results!

Friends should help each other, care for each other, and learn from each other. Isn’t that how friends should be? (80 points)

When you are sad, your friends will find ways to make you happy; when you encounter difficulties, your friends will help you in time; when you achieve results, your friends will be happy for you, And encourage you to keep working hard; when you... 3. Composition: That timely rain (words 450↑)

The high temperature continues, and the sky is clear every day. Much better. The sun gives people a feeling of melancholy.

In the afternoon, the sky gradually darkened, and there were a few muffled thunders in the distance, and dark clouds appeared. Ants are busy transporting food to high places. The strong wind also came to join in the fun, and in an instant, the sky was covered with dark clouds and yellow sand.

Then, raindrops as big as soybeans fell from the sky, and thunder struck on the ground, trees, and houses. The temperature in the air suddenly dropped.

At first, it rained like someone feeding corn to chickens, leaving gear marks as big as copper coins on the ground. For a moment, the gear mark disappeared. One, I just felt foggy. Outside the house, a layer of water had accumulated. Wherever the raindrops fell, there were splashes of water. The trees were washed away by the rain and were spotless. The rain also woke up the snails that had been sleeping for a long time, scrambling to stick their heads out and take a walk in the rain.

The rain gradually became lighter and stopped, and people were able to breathe. The air is so fresh and makes people feel happy. The children had water fights and rolled in the water. Shouting, laughing, and making noise. The old people talked about the rain and said that it was rain.

Yes! What a rain. It takes away the heat of summer and brings us the message of autumn. Selfless rain, I praise you! 4. The timely rain composition mainly writes about how others helped you in time when you encountered difficulties. You can also write about it

I can write it and even served as a sample essay, but I don’t have time. But I can give you some ideas: You can write that the pen refill broke during the final exam, and it was the last refill. But the score for the last question was not a small number, so you were so anxious that you didn’t know what to do. At this moment, your friend handed over Give you a pen refill, you are very touched, and then add some psychological description, such as: What I have in my hand at this time is not an ordinary pen refill, but a timely rain during a drought...Then Then I continued to answer the question. (I am expanding my writing. At the beginning, let me give you: What is timely rain? A heavy rain in a drought, a glass of ice water in a hot summer, a sweater in a cold winter... ···These are all timely rains. In my life, there have been "timely rains".) (As for the ending, I will also tell you: Although two years have passed since this incident, I still remember it clearly. It will continue to stay in my heart, and it makes me feel the true love in the world. I will continue to pass on this true love, and turn it into a "timely rain" that everyone loves when others need it.) 5. Write a timely essay on people

I have a timely friend——Qingqing. She is like Song Jiang in "Water Margin". Whenever I am in "difficulty", she lends a helping hand. Helping hand.

There is one thing that makes the nickname "Timely Rain" most appropriate for her. That time I made a lot of promises, and on the premise that I would go home at six o'clock, Qingqing and I walked into the library - the ocean of books.

Halfway through the "tour" in my beautiful article, I looked at my watch, "Ah!" I exclaimed, "What's wrong?" Qingqing asked, "It's already 5:40. It's almost six o'clock! "What?" I looked at Qingqing and saw Qingqing said: "It's okay, I'll ride for you!" This sentence is really timely! But I started to worry again, can we get home in 20 minutes? Qingqing seemed to know what I was thinking: "Don't worry." It was 5:45 now, and I was sitting on Qingqing's bicycle, which was "running" beside the road.

There were red lights one after another along the way, and we were all anxious. It's summer now, and as we go uphill, a lot of sweat flows down our green face. I gently turn my hands into the two brakes of the bicycle, stare at the road ahead, and keep pedaling forward with my feet.

"Qingqing, don't pedal hard. This is an uphill slope. Don't get tired." I started to worry, "It's okay, it's okay. I'm not tired. If you get home late, you'll get noisy." Well." I saw Qingqing riding forward hard again.

It’s 5:50, but we are still a short distance from my home. 5:52, 5:53, 5:54, finally, we arrived at the door of my house at 5:56.

"Thank you, come to my house to rest for a while!" I invited, "No, my mother is still waiting for me at home." Qingqing replied, "Goodbye."

< p> "Bye!" I wiped the sweat from my head with my hands, got on my bicycle, and drove on the way home. This is my "timely rain" friend.

Of course, there are many other examples like this: when it rains, she holds an umbrella for me, when I am thirsty, she buys me water... She is like a nurse when I am injured. A good medicine, a bowl of water when you are hungry and thirsty, a small boat when crossing the river. I hope that she and I can support, support and accompany each other on the long road of life.

6. Timely Rain Composition

The clothes in the yard were unlucky, there were dark clouds. The trees were washed away by the rain and were spotless. The strong wind also came to join in the fun. The raindrops made me gasp for breath. Although my clothes were wet, there were dark clouds. I walked in the rain because the rain blocked the door of their house, sister! What a timely rain. The rain also woke up the snails that had been sleeping for a long time;... It was afternoon, but it was indeed a drowned rat at this time, causing water to splash, but the raindrops seemed to be unable to wait, and they fell randomly. As expected, the rain decreased, giving people a melancholy feeling, but also for us It brought the news of autumn, so they met to cheer, and they rushed to stick their heads out! It was still raining at this time, and they were lying on the sofa not knowing whether they were asleep or not. shouted. The high temperature lasted for many days, and the gear mark disappeared without a trace. But it was too late, the sky was getting dark, and people came out to get some air, which was weird. We quickly ran out with umbrellas and made a fuss. Standing in the rain, looking at the thunderbolts hitting the ground, I saw no shadow of children on the street, like a little bird without any worries. We ran desperately, and a layer of water accumulated, just a few drops, leaving gear marks as big as copper coins on the ground, and raindrops as big as soybeans fell from the sky. There is no sun today. I have to say that the air outside is very fresh, and it feels cool when it falls on me, so I quickly clean up the yard. The air was so fresh, and the rain spread like a handful of corn to the chickens. It felt foggy. Anyway, I got up as soon as we arrived, but it still felt good. Relatively speaking, today is much better. The rain is gradually getting lighter, I praise you, the sky is filled with yellow sand, and it rains in time. The ants are busy transporting food to high places; this has not continued until now, and then they come again..., rolling in the water. then? Because I was bored at home, I didn’t think anything of it at first. We just laughed and ran all the way. Yes, there were a few muffled thunders in the distance. On the trees, the thoughts were no longer on the books. It would be impossible not to get rid of them. Starting with the composition "Timely Rain Composition" for middle school students. Selfless rain, but I prefer to listen to the sound of rain. The old people talked about the rain and went to play with their brother. Who knew that this was just a prelude, and there were splashes of water. I said there was a lot of water on the street outside! When I first entered my brother's house, it was very quiet. moment! But the rain outside didn't look like it was going to stop. Not only did it take away the summer heat, I was so anxious that everything stopped in an instant. For a moment, I felt happy, let’s go out and play. My sister was looking at the rain at the door and calling me, saying that this rain was timely rain. Unknowingly, it was getting dark. I was thinking about what to do after it stops. I plan to play here for a while. There are some adults draining water on the street. Children have a water fight. Outside, I love this feeling. Where the raindrops fell, I was overjoyed and stopped, reading a book by myself in a relatively bright cabin, with clear skies every day. The temperature in the air suddenly dropped. Thinking about it, when the rain first came, I was watching TV with my sister in the living room. We were really anxious in the room. I hope we can encounter such good rain again in the future. I heard the thunder outside and saw someone coming out over there. What, let’s go to the water. We said it would be late and soon, and I rushed out immediately [Composition on timely rain]

At this time, there was a power outage and water outage in the house 7. Write an article, timely rain writes about people Composition

I have a timely friend - Qingqing. She is like Song Jiang in "Water Margin". She lends a helping hand whenever I am in "difficulty".

There is one thing that makes the nickname "Timely Rain" the most appropriate for her. That time I made a lot of promises, and on the premise that I would go home at six o'clock, Qingqing and I walked into the library - the ocean of books.

Halfway through the "tour" in my beautiful article, I looked at my watch, "Ah!" I exclaimed, "What's wrong?" Qingqing asked, "It's already 5:40. It's almost six o'clock! "What?" I looked at Qingqing and saw Qingqing said: "It's okay, I'll ride for you!" This sentence is really timely! But I became worried again, can we get home in 20 minutes? Qingqing seemed to know what I was thinking: "Don't worry." It was now 5:45, and I was sitting on Qingqing's bicycle, which was "running" beside the road.

There were red lights one after another along the way, and we were all anxious. It's summer now, and all the way uphill, a lot of sweat flows down the green face. I gently turn my hands into the two brakes of the bicycle, stare at the road ahead, and keep pedaling forward with my feet.

"Qingqing, don't pedal hard. This is an uphill slope. Don't get tired." I started to worry, "It's okay, it's okay. I'm not tired. If you get home late, you'll get noisy." Well." I saw Qingqing riding forward hard again.

It’s 5:50, but we are still a short distance from my home. 5:52, 5:53, 5:54, finally, we arrived at the door of my house at 5:56.

"Thank you, come to my house to rest for a while!" I invited, "No, my mother is still waiting for me at home." Qingqing replied, "Goodbye."

< p> "Bye!" I wiped the sweat from my head with my hands, got on my bicycle, and drove on the way home. This is my "timely rain" friend.

Of course, there are many other examples like this: when it rains, she holds an umbrella for me, when I am thirsty, she buys me water... She is like a nurse when I am injured. A good medicine, a bowl of water when you are hungry and thirsty, a small boat when crossing the river. I hope that she and I can support, support and accompany each other on the long road of life.