Modifying a defective sentence refers to modifying a sentence with linguistic defects so that it does not change the original meaning and makes the sentence more fluent. Below are the typical incorrect sentences and answers I have compiled for everyone to read! Typical incorrect sentences and answers 1

1. Relevant departments treat a very small number of people who disrespect the labor of sanitation workers, make trouble unreasonably, and even beat and insult sanitation workers. The incident was criticized and educated in a timely manner and dealt with seriously. (Inappropriate combination,? Incident? Not allowed? Criticism and education?)

2. Our hometown is beautiful and fertile. The land here is fertile and is especially suitable for growing fruit trees, cotton, and sweet potatoes. In addition, it is also suitable for planting pear trees. and jujube trees. (Inappropriate classification, pear trees and jujube trees are both fruit trees)

3. The entire factory staff discussed and listened to the factory director’s report on improving business management. (Inappropriate word order, it should be "listen and discuss", there is a time sequence relationship)

4. Recently, the New District Court concluded this case, and Xiao Zhang, who was in breach of contract, was ordered to compensate the plaintiff Hao Luyuan The trading company suffered economic losses and legal fees of more than 3,000 yuan. (The meaning is unclear. Is it? Economic losses and legal fees? More than 3,000 yuan? Or just? Litigation fees? More than 3,000 yuan?)

5. Criticism and self-criticism are effective ways to correct mistakes and improve Thought level approach. (Effective questions should be moved before methods)

6. Yesterday, many representatives talked enthusiastically with him in the lounge. (You should be enthusiastic about talking to him)

7. This training course was jointly organized by the National Staff Education Commission and the State Economic Commission at the end of May this year. Two people from all over the country More than 100 employee representatives participated in this training. (?Joint? should be transferred to?Before holding?, giving way to time adverbials)

8. The student union cadres of the three schools met in the teaching office to study the development of the second classroom activity this semester. (The meaning is unclear, is it? Three schools? Or? Three student union cadres?)

9. The price of domestically produced cars is low and suitable for the common people to accept. For example, the unified market price of Urban Beibei is only 6.08. Ten thousand yuan, "Ingel" is 68,800 yuan, and the new "Santana" is only about a hundred thousand yuan. (Repeat,? Hundreds of thousands of yuan? This is

It can not be used again?)

10. Carrying out criticism and self-criticism is to correct the party's style and strengthen the party's strength. A proven method of cohesion. (Inappropriate word order, "a" should come before "effective")

11. Huaneng Group's No. 3 Power Plant has renovated its boiler equipment this year. The power generation per ton of coal has increased by 1.5 times, and the coal consumption has increased by 1.5 times. There are 1.2 times fewer domains. (Inappropriate wording, ? reduce? cannot use multiples)

12. After the completion of China’s first computer integrated manufacturing system engineering research center, domestic and foreign colleagues greatly appreciated its advanced functions. More than 23,000 people came to visit. (Improper choice of words, "person-time" is a plural quantifier and cannot be the subject)

13. At five or six o'clock in the morning, the streets leading to the airport were lined with tens of thousands of farewell crowds. (A misnomer, "crowd" is a collective noun)

14. When they encountered difficulties, they did not feel depressed. Instead, they gained strength from everyone's trust and care, and established the spirit of overcoming difficulties. confidence. (Inappropriate matching, should be? from? in?)

15. On March 17, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee due to a bribery scandal. The next day, newspapers around the world made detailed reports on this incident that shocked the international sports world. (Improper use of prepositions, should be? Right?)

16. The name Jiao Yulu may be unfamiliar to young people, but it is very familiar to people over forty years old.

(The subject and object are reversed, which should be: for young people?, for people over forty years old?)

17. Why has this waste of talents not been brought to the attention of relevant departments so far? What about the emphasis? (Abuse of prepositions causes the subject to be incomplete, should it be deleted? For?

18. Only by fundamentally solving the problem of who is it, we can better serve the people. (Improper collocation of related words , should be a necessary condition, used only by talents)

19. No matter how meager your gift is, in the hearts of farmers, it is like a heavy weight

. (The correlative words and adverbs are not collocated properly. The exact meaning used here is "so", and the "no matter" and "no matter" are used later to refer to "how much")

20. Although he is a farmer, he usually likes I study, know a lot of words, and am good at knitting Yangko. (The related words are missing, so you should add "but" before "usually".) Typical correction of wrong sentences and answers 2

1 () Choose the following groups of sentences. A sentence with clear meaning and no language errors.

A. An excellent basketball coach from the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience is here.

B. In New China. In the construction industry, they exert their infinite power.

C. There are various things used by Lenin in the past.

D. This kind of seed is necessary. Don't change, it has caused widespread discussion among leaders and the masses.

　2 ( )

　A. We came to this world-famous museum and saw a dazzling array of art treasures. Makes people feel proud.

B. The strong and fast rhythm of rock music and the blurry and flashing light effects make people dazzled.

C. If the thoughts in an article are. If there is a problem, then even if the writing is very good, it is still useless.

D. Only by strengthening confrontation training can Chinese football go global, otherwise it will not even be able to break out of Asia.

　3 ( )

A. my country’s cotton production was not self-sufficient in the past.

B. I think this answer and the investigation and treatment of this issue show a certain attitude. Irresponsible attitude.

C. Before liberation, the money my father and brother earned was not enough to support the family.

D. We do not completely deny this poem. He did not reveal the hope, but said that the hope was very slim.

　4 ( )

　A. On October 11th, with the idea of ????learning from the Department of Aviation, we decided. The blackboard newspaper has also been published.

B. In addition to the issued admission ticket, members’ families must also have family badges. If one of the two is missing, they will not be admitted.

C. , it can be seen how weak the attitude of being responsible for the concern of the working class is.

D. Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched. In this campaign, a series of tasks such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system must be completed.

　5 ( )

　A. Now the fishermen themselves have elected the administrative team leader, who is responsible for controlling the fishermen’s life and production management.

B. It has been ten years since Lao Zhang passed away.

C. The People's Republic of China was established, the Communist Party's Program of Comradeship was promulgated, and women are legally equal.

Mr. D. was talking eloquently. Although his voice and smile had not changed much, the wrinkles at the corners of his eyes seemed to imply the hardship and unhappiness of these years.

　6 ( )

　A. Only by having close contact with society and contacting the masses can we provide insightful opinions on national security and people's happiness and security.

B. "Read three hundred Tang poems by heart, and you can still recite them even if you don't know how to recite them?" This sentence is applicable to both poetry writers and writers.

C. In disputes about right and wrong on scientific issues, we should not adopt a persuasive approach, especially we should not engage in things like literary inquisition. Whenever this was done in history, there was no good result.

D. When driving past this place, he found a sign with red letters on one side. The handwriting seemed unclear. 7 ( )

A. The "Physician Law" clearly stipulates that registered doctors in many countries and regions around the world must join the local medical association.

B. Using social science theories and methods to study the Internet is a new topic faced by social scientists.

C. The style of the plaque is vulgar and grotesque, which is certainly inelegant. It worships foreigners and favors foreigners, and has colonial cultural overtones, which is also shameful to the Chinese people. D. my country’s national debt issuance scale this year exceeds 195.2 billion yuan.

　8 ( )

　A. The filter developed by the Transportation Research Institute that can purify low-grade diesel exhaust gas has made a contribution to environmental protection.

B. In order to implement the "Teacher Law", Wanshou County has reimbursed all medical expenses owed to teachers on the eve of March 8th Festival.

C. The director of the wood processing factory reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the factory's equipment, mobilized employees to work hard to learn how to use new equipment, and thus launched a series of new products.

D. Stores blatantly sell pirated software. We must severely crack down on this violation of publishing laws.

　9 ( )

　A. Since the Chinese people accepted Marxism, the Chinese revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.

B. We must reform and improve the new science and technology system that is in line with the objective laws of science and technology development and compatible with the socialist market economy.

C. In September this year, two young people under the age of 30 were promoted to the important positions of executive vice president of the knitting branch and garment branch of Xihu Dali. This means? West Lake Dali began to implement its awareness in the cultivation of human resources.

D. A hundred years ago, a stubborn fifty-seven-year-old single man who could still hear the thunder but could no longer hear his own music played by a large symphony orchestra raised his fist to the sky for the last time. The roaring sky then passed away.

　10 ( )

A. Those congressmen who speak out about human rights or shut up about human rights, what kind of human rights are the white police in the United States enforcing on black people?

B. Austrian mountaineering clubs are spread all over the country. It has 250,000 members, and members pay certain membership dues based on their annual economic income.

C. The most fundamental problem facing China’s economy is still insufficient demand. Starting from this macroeconomic status quo, it is still necessary to continue to implement active fiscal policies to promote economic structural adjustment and accelerate infrastructure construction, including promoting the development of the western region.

D. In the past ten years, the annual number of book publications has more than doubled, while the total number of prints has remained basically the same, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.

　11 ( )

　A. In the past three years, the county's total grain output has made great strides forward at an average annual increase rate of 20%.

B. In addition to groundwater, rainwater is also one of the sources of river water.

C. Huaisu’s unrestrained spirit and Bada Shanren’s character are the pride of the Han nation. However, Van Gogh’s passion and Matisse’s rhythm have long been fascinated by the Chinese people.

D. The National College and University Admissions Student Source Planning Working Conference was recently held in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, this year the number of students from the central colleges and universities in the west and minority areas will increase, and the college entrance examination admission rate in all provinces, autonomous regions, and municipalities across the country will exceed 30%.

　12 ( )

　A. This is a heroic mother, a mother with an open mind.

B. The article analyzes the strategic characteristics adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.

C. Cigarette smuggling is very rampant, and my country’s customs has made cracking down on smuggled cigarettes a priority.

D. The limitations of the author's own era and class cannot but be reflected in his works. This is an issue that we must pay attention to when evaluating ancient literary works.

　13 ( )

　A. The temptation of surfing the Internet is irresistible to modern people, but the expensive online consumption makes Internet fans heartbroken.

B. It was recently confirmed by relevant departments that the high school freshmen in my country who entered school in September 2000 will no longer use the current high school Chinese textbooks that have been in use for 20 years. Middle schools in various regions can decide on their own to choose one of the two new textbooks, "High School Chinese Experimental Textbook" and "High School Chinese Experimental Textbook" compiled by the People's Education Press based on their own circumstances.

C. We must overcome the tendency to only focus on developing tourism and not pay attention to the protection of tourism resources, and take practical measures to protect the river embankments.

D. According to statistics: there are at least 200 million paulownia trees planted in Henan Province, and the paulownia intercropping area has increased to more than 10 million acres. 14 ( )

A. Tsinghua University adopts an online test method, allowing candidates to have a eloquent discussion with professors online, and then multiple professors vote for recommendations, and finally the school decides whether to admit.

B. If China wants to join the WTO and participate in international competition, it urgently needs to protect intellectual property rights and enforce trademark laws.

C. Created a breach at Huayuankou in Zhengzhou, directly submerging a population of more than 6.19 million in 13 counties in Henan and Anhui provinces.

D. Lu Xun attached great importance to the literary and artistic creation of children. He pointed out: The destiny of children is the destiny of the future.

　15 ( )

A. This station will broadcast a televised speech on production safety issues by the Director of the National Work Safety Commission at noon today.

B. His parents are both middle school teachers, and his mother teaches at his alma mater, Xixiang No. 1 Middle School. This time, she traveled thousands of miles to come to Beijing as a school representative.

C. The target audience of this magazine is mainly middle school Chinese teachers and other Chinese workers.

D. Looking along the sound of the flute, I saw a young man sitting by the lake playing the flute. The sound of the flute was so sad and sad.

16 ( )

A. Who can deny that the quality of a hero is gradually cultivated through hard study every day?

B In the early days of the Gulf War, Iraq set up a large number of false targets to confuse the reconnaissance effects of multinational military aircraft and reconnaissance satellites, and eventually retained some aircraft.

C. He failed to inform the other party of the competition date as decided by the student union, which resulted in a misunderstanding.

D. I remember that when I met him, he was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained. 17 ( )

A. Macau has drifted away from the motherland for 400 years. Can we deny that Macau’s return to the motherland is not the common wish of every descendant of the Yan and Huang Dynasties? B. Farmers along the river are trying to improve soil fertility and ensure that they will ensure the next year. Grain production increased and the area of ??green manure was consciously expanded.

C. Since last autumn, we have achieved great results by prohibiting and publicizing the felling and trafficking of trees in the forestry areas of the upper reaches of the Yangtze River.

D. The "Medical Green Channel" recently established by Beijing Health Messenger Company and 10 hospitals is a brand-new mechanism for quickly seeking medical treatment.

　18 ( )

　A. I don’t think anyone can deny that this drama has a certain negative impact.

B. Both Zhang Xiangdong and his son are teachers. He said: It was my father’s dedication to teaching that inspired me to step onto the podium. ? C. He found out that what he bought was a parallel-imported shirt. He was very angry, so he called a taxi back.

D. He did not follow the advice of his tutor and modified the ideas of the paper, which affected the quality of the paper.

　19 ( )

A. After rectification, the order inside and outside the venue has improved significantly, and spectators no longer crowd each other in and out.

B. The accident caused serious economic losses. According to conservative estimates by relevant parties, the direct losses were at least 60 million yuan.

C. The Chinese swimming team participating in the Asian Games is composed of 12 outstanding athletes selected from 20 training team members. D. If the U.S. government fails to fulfill its obligations in the Sino-U.S. Trade Agreement, the Multi-Fiber Agreement and the Textile Agreement, then it is difficult for anyone to predict that the trade between China and the United States will not be reversed.

　20 ( )

　A. NATO’s indiscriminate bombing of Yugoslavia set a precedent in the history of international relations of digging its own grave.

B. Throughout the ages, those who have achieved success and made a difference to mankind are all the result of down-to-earth and hard work.

C. It is not easy to collect historical materials, and it is even more difficult to identify and use historical materials. Most of the historians in China in the past mainly used their strength in this aspect.

D. The "Golden Jade Clothes" of Liu Sheng, Prince Jing of Zhongshan in the Western Han Dynasty, unearthed in my country, will be on public display at the Palace Museum in the New Year.

　21 ( )

A. In this competition, in order to win the championship in one fell swoop, the Sichuan Men's Volleyball Team sent out all its main players.

B. The big cherries planted by Uncle Zhao were almost all sold out as soon as they were picked.

C. I looked at the smiling face sitting under the fluorescent light, and a warm feeling suddenly came to my heart.

D. Under the guidance of the tour guide, they walked among the nineteen archways of Quezhuang and were filled with emotions.

　22 ( )

A. The fierce competition in the market economy will inevitably put some products in an embarrassing situation and make them unable to make ends meet.

B. Some people said that his defeat was related to personal grudges, but when he retorted, he firmly denied that it was not related to personal grudges. C. During the high jump test, Xiao Chen ran forward, kicked his feet, and jumped up? Oh, what a pity, he almost missed it.

D. Mount Emei is one of the four famous Buddhist mountains in my country. It has green pines and cypresses, flowing springs and waterfalls, beautiful scenery and majestic momentum. It is known as "Emei is the most beautiful place in the world".

　23 ( )

A. Around the Qingming Festival, the army sent more than 800 people to participate in tree planting work in the suburbs.

B. A good metaphor may be similar in shape, spirit, or both, and it is always inseparable from the fundamental characteristic of similarity.

C. The development of a country’s science and technology is based on its economy, culture and education.

D. This new drug is very convenient to use and has a long-lasting effect, which can last for 12 hours in the body.

　24 ( )

　A. The teacher had a sincere exchange of opinions with him in the office yesterday.

B. This year’s "Examination Instructions" has made some new adjustments to the examination content and requirements of the Chinese subject.

C. When I walked into the experimental building of the newly built normal school, I felt very inspired and wanted to study here.

D. After being educated on the facts, all medical staff have raised their awareness on the issue of correctly inheriting the medical heritage of the motherland.

25 ( )

A. The "Pronunciation Chart" - that is, the "Pronunciation Chart" jointly issued by the State Language Commission and the State Education Commission in 1985 stipulates: ?yin? is pronounced y?n .

B. The origin of the Mid-Autumn Festival. The story of "Chang'e flying to the moon" has been widely circulated among the people since ancient times, which is one of its causes. C. When students are emotionally excited by external things, I will seize this opportunity and guide students to write down their own psychological activities and feelings.

D. Many parents are too doting on their children, and they only need food to open their mouths and clothes to use skills, which is very harmful to the growth of their children.

1. A(B) The hidden words are moved to the front of infinite words. C The words used by Lenin in the past are moved to the front of all kinds of words. D It caused the words to be moved. ?Extensive?front.)

2. D(A.It all makes people feel inconsistent with the subject of the previous sentence. B.Rhythm makes people see that the subject and predicate do not match. C.The words are not matched. Behind "Even")

3. B (A cannot be self-sufficient in cotton, not the production of cotton. C. Feeding oneself does not match the object and object. D Negation is inappropriate . )

4. B (A The subject is inconsistent, the second half of the sentence is changed? We also ran a blackboard report? C The subject and predicate do not match, how weak is the care and responsibility in the change?. D Action The object does not match, "strengthen" is changed to "perfect" )

5. D (A go to master B go away from now C women are equal in law? The meaning is unclear, Is it "women's own equality" or "women and men's legal equality" is not clear)

6. B (A "insights" and "opinions" are semantically repeated. C. Remove the same type of thing. . D? There is ambiguity in placing a ? )

7. B (A? The subject of ? is not clear. C The wording is inappropriate, and ? is changed to ?. D The expression is not standardized. , "More than 100 million" is changed to "More than 100 million".)

8. D (A. The subject is inconsistent, "Developed" is changed to "Developed". B. All words are placed after "Teacher". C. If "report" lacks an object, you can add "" at the end of the original sentence)

9. D (A. "since" is placed at the beginning of the sentence. B. The wording is inappropriate, "reform" is changed to "." Establish . C ?Add ?been after ?)

10. C (A ?put those ?at the beginning of the sentence. B ?pay? Change to "Half".) 11. D (A. Output? Development? Improper subject-verb matching. B. Go to? Wait?. C. Correct implementation -? Deep understanding? Replace the order.)

12. D(A? Mother of a hero? There is ambiguity. B There is ambiguity as to whether ? and ? are prepositions or conjunctions. C The work of adding ? after the original sentence.)

13. B (A’s wording Inappropriate, "online" is changed to "online". C. To overcome the mismatch between "verb" and "object". , "Manage well" is changed to "Do a good job". C. Submerge the population? D The first half of the sentence is ambiguous)

15. A (B. Thousands of miles away?) ?Behind. C Remove the subject. Remove the sound of the flute. C. The decision of the student union is ambiguous. D ? Or just that the subject of ? is unclear and ambiguous. )

17. D (A uses too many negative words, remove "不". B "expand" does not match the verb and object of "area" properly. C "harmony promotion" is changed to "propaganda", and Put it behind the forest.)

18. A(B) He is not clear and there is ambiguity. C. Called a taxi to go back. There is ambiguity.

D. What the tutor's advice is is unclear and ambiguous. )

19. D (A removes ? mutual ?. B removes ? above ?. C adds ? from ? after ?.)

20. D (A? sets a precedent? ? Improper matching, to create a sentence. B The sentence structure is mixed, and the result is ? There is ambiguity in this aspect. ?Basic? Contradicts ?All?. C ?Feeling?cannot be modified with?? It’s OK to remove it.)

23. B (A) people cannot participate in the labor force, and the subject and predicate are not well matched. C Remove them and put a country in the previous sentence. Behind. D? The effect is very long? Improper collocation)

24. B (A? In the office? is placed after? The school's new experimental building?. D is an inappropriate word, so please change it to "in")