Modifying a defective sentence refers to modifying a sentence with grammatical defects so that it does not change the original meaning and makes the sentence more fluent. What are the common signs in sick sentences? The following are the common signs in sick sentences that I have compiled. Welcome to appreciate the common signs in sick sentences 1

1. Parallel phrases appear, which may be due to improper collocation or improper classification. , improper word order or unclear meaning.

1. Relevant departments have promptly criticized, educated and severely dealt with the very few incidents of disrespecting the labor of sanitation workers, making unreasonable troubles, and even beating and insulting sanitation workers. (Inappropriate combination,? Incident? Not allowed? Criticism and education?)

2. Our hometown is beautiful and fertile. The land here is fertile and is especially suitable for growing fruit trees, cotton, and sweet potatoes. In addition, it is also suitable for planting pear trees. and jujube trees. (Inappropriate classification, pear trees and jujube trees are both fruit trees)

2. Multiple attributives and adverbials appear, which may be due to inappropriate word order

1. Criticism and self Criticism is an effective method to correct mistakes and improve ideological level. (Effective questions should be moved before methods)

2. Yesterday, many representatives talked enthusiastically with him in the lounge. (You should be enthusiastic before talking to him)

3. Quantitative phrases appear, which may be due to unclear semantics, repetition, improper word order, or improper wording.

1. The student union cadres of the three schools met in the teaching office to study the development of the second classroom activity this semester. (The meaning is unclear, is it? Three schools? Or? Three student union cadres?)

2. The price of domestically produced cars is low and suitable for the people to accept. For example, the unified market price of Urban Beibei is only 6.08 Ten thousand yuan, "Ingel" is 68,800 yuan, and the new "Santana" is only about a hundred thousand yuan. (Repeat,? Hundreds of thousands of yuan? This is an approximation and cannot be used again?)

4. Prepositions appear, which may be due to improper collocation, confusing structure, reversal of subject and object, or incomplete subject

1. When they encountered difficulties, they did not feel depressed. Instead, they gained strength from everyone’s trust and care and established the confidence to overcome difficulties. (Inappropriate matching, should be? from? in?)

On March 17, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee due to a bribery scandal. The next day, newspapers around the world made detailed reports on this incident that shocked the international sports world. (Improper use of prepositions, should be? Right?)

5. There are related words (conjunctions), which may be due to improper collocation, incompleteness, or improper word order.

1. Only by fundamentally solving the problem of who is the person, can we better serve the people (the related words are not properly matched, they should be necessary conditions, use ? Only? Only?)

2. No matter how meager your gift is, it is like a heavy weight in the hearts of farmers. (The correlative words and adverbs are not collocated properly. The exact meaning used here is "so", and the "no matter" and "no matter" are used later to refer to "how much" incorrectly)

6. Pronouns appear, which may be semantic. Unclear and repetitive.

1. This exquisite lantern will be given to the guest with the highest score today as a gift. (The meaning is unclear. Who does he refer to? It’s unclear)

2. When the old man was 80 years old, he still clearly remembered his brother’s evaluation of himself when he participated in the student movement: a sentimentalist.

(The meaning is unclear. Does "self" refer to the old man or the old man's brother?)

7. There is a long object, which may be due to the incomplete central word of the object. , Improper collocation

1. In order to comprehensively promote the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig raising industry, this county held three technical training courses for breeders. (The object center is incomplete, should I add? Experience?)

2. Understanding sandstorms and understanding sandstorms is to prevent sandstorms from a scientific perspective and reduce the losses caused by sandstorms.

(To achieve the purpose of missing the object and center of ? and adding ? after losing ?)

8. There are multiple predicates, which may be due to improper collocation or surreptitious substitution of subjects.

1. This cultural station has become a place to educate and help underachieving young people, save and cultivate delinquent youth, and has been commended by superior leaders many times (improper matching, "cultivation" and "dead youth" are not matched)

2. Although this factory is small in scale, it has won the Provincial Science Conference Award twice and the title of Provincial Quality Product three times. Its products are exported to all parts of the country and Southeast Asia. (Changing the subject, "factory" can't be awarded the title of provincial quality product?)

9. Questions and negative words appear, which may be inappropriate.

2. In recent years, Wang Fang has been collecting and organizing folk songs almost all the time, and has accumulated a large amount of data ("all the time" is equivalent to "every moment", here it is used with "forget"). , which conflicts with the accumulation of a large amount of information later)

10. There is a fixed structure and definitions, which may be structural confusion

1. The "Consumer Rights and Interests Protection Law" deeply It is welcomed by consumers because it strengthens people's awareness of self-protection and protects consumers' rights and interests to the maximum extent. (If there is a structure of "for what" and "by what", if there is no structure of "receive what", the word "all" should be removed)

2. So far, people are not perfect yet The control of natural disasters and the quality of agricultural harvests are largely determined by the quality of natural conditions (should it be determined by?)

11. The emergence of classical Chinese words and written language , may be a duplicate.

1. The plan to set up card toll collection on traffic trunk lines must be discussed and approved by the local people’s congress and made public to the public. (All ? means ? is to ?, ? is to ? and it is repeated)

2. The opening ceremony of the Athens Olympic Games was brilliant, can be called first-class, and has been universally praised by world public opinion. (Can? That is, you can say it, you can repeat it)

12. In phrases with the word "?", the semantics may be unclear, improper collocation (subject change), or improper word order. .

1. The sky gradually became dark, the wind blew again outside, and the number of pedestrians on the street gradually became less and less. The umbrella repairer was very anxious. (The meaning is unclear. The umbrella repairer may be an umbrella repair customer or an umbrella repair master?)

2. On the evening of August 3, 2003, the 29th Umbrella Repair Festival was held at the Temple of Heaven in Beijing. During the Olympic Games emblem release ceremony, the lights of the Hall of Prayer for Good Harvest were brilliant that night, making it even more majestic and majestic (improper collocation, misuse of the word "?", and secretly changing the subject, resulting in "lights" and "majestic and majestic" not matching, the word "?" should be deleted ) Common signs in sick sentences 2

　1 ( )

　A. An excellent basketball coach from the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience is here.

B. In the construction of New China, they exert their infinite power.

C. There are various things used by Lenin in the past.

D. Whether or not these seeds should be replaced has aroused widespread discussion among leaders and the masses.

　2 ( )

　A. We came to this world-famous museum and saw the dazzling array of art treasures, which all make people feel proud.

B. The strong and fast rhythm of rock music and the blurry and flashing lighting effects make people dazzled.

C. If the ideas in an article are problematic, then even if the writing is very good, it is still unacceptable.

D. Unless confrontational training is strengthened, Chinese football will be able to go global, otherwise it will not even be able to break out of Asia.

　3 ( )

　A. my country’s cotton production was not self-sufficient in the past.

B. I think this reply and the investigation and handling of this issue show an irresponsible attitude.

C. Before liberation, the money my father and brother earned was not enough to support the family.

D. We do not completely deny that this poem does not reveal hope, but that this hope is very slim.

　4 ( )

　A. On October 11th, with the idea of ??learning from the Department of Aviation, our blackboard newspaper was also published.

B. In addition to the tickets issued, family members of members must also have family badges. If one of the two is missing, they will not be admitted.

C. It shows how weak the attitude towards the working class is.

D. Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched. In this campaign, a series of tasks such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system must be completed.

　5 ( )

　A. Now the fishermen themselves have elected the administrative team leader, who is responsible for controlling the fishermen’s life and production management.

B. It has been ten years since Lao Zhang passed away.

C. The People's Republic of China was established, the Communist Party's Program of Comradeship was promulgated, and women are legally equal.

Mr. D. was talking eloquently. Although his voice and smile had not changed much, the wrinkles at the corners of his eyes seemed to imply the hardship and unhappiness of these years.

　6 ( )

　A. Only by having close contact with society and contacting the masses can we provide insightful opinions on national security and people's happiness and security.

B. "If you have read three hundred Tang poems by heart, you will be able to recite them even if you don't know how to recite them." This sentence is applicable to both poetry writing and literary writing.

C. In disputes about right and wrong on scientific issues, we should not adopt a persuasive approach, especially we should not engage in things like literary inquisition. Whenever this was done in history, there was no good result.

D. When driving past this place, he found a sign with red letters on one side. The handwriting seemed unclear.

　7 ( )

　A. The "Physician Law" clearly stipulates that registered physicians in many countries and regions around the world must join the local physician association.

B. Using social science theories and methods to study the Internet is a new topic faced by social scientists.

C. The style of the plaque is vulgar and grotesque, which is certainly inelegant. It worships foreigners and favors foreigners, and has colonial cultural overtones, which is also shameful to the Chinese people.

D. my country’s national debt issuance scale this year is more than 195.2 billion yuan.

　8 ( )

　A. The filter developed by the Transportation Research Institute that can purify low-grade diesel exhaust gas has made a contribution to environmental protection.

B. In order to implement the "Teacher Law", Wanshou County has reimbursed all medical expenses owed to teachers on the eve of March 8th Festival.

C. The director of the wood processing factory reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the factory's equipment, mobilized employees to work hard to learn how to use new equipment, and thus launched a series of new products.

D. Stores blatantly sell pirated software. We must severely crack down on this violation of publishing laws.

　9 ( )

　A. Since the Chinese people accepted Marxism, the Chinese revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.

B. We must reform and improve the new science and technology system that is in line with the objective laws of science and technology development and compatible with the socialist market economy.

C. In September of this year, "West Lake Dali" had two young people under 30 years old promoted to the important position of executive vice president of the knitting branch and garment branch, which means that " "Xihu Dali" began to implement its awareness in the cultivation of human resources.

D. A hundred years ago, a stubborn fifty-seven-year-old single man who could still hear the thunder but could no longer hear his own music played by a large symphony orchestra raised his fist to the sky for the last time. The roaring sky then passed away.

　10 ( )

A. Those congressmen who talk about "human rights" but shut up about "human rights", what exactly are the "human rights" that white police officers in the United States enforce against black people?

B. Austrian mountaineering clubs are spread all over the country. It has 250,000 members, and members pay certain membership dues based on their annual economic income.

C. The most fundamental problem facing China’s economy is still insufficient demand. Starting from this macroeconomic status quo, it is still necessary to continue to implement active fiscal policies to promote economic structural adjustment and accelerate infrastructure construction, including promoting the development of the western region.

D. In the past ten years, the annual number of published books has more than doubled, while the total number of prints has remained basically the same, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.

　11 ( )

　A. In the past three years, the county's total grain output has made great strides forward at an average annual increase rate of 20%.

B. In addition to groundwater, rainwater is also one of the sources of river water.

C. Huai Su’s unrestrained spirit and Bada Shanren’s character are the pride of the Han nation. However, Van Gogh’s passion and Matisse’s rhythm have long been enchanted by the Chinese people.

D. The National College and University Admissions Student Source Planning Working Conference was recently held in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, this year the number of students from the central colleges and universities in the west and minority areas will increase, and the college entrance examination admission rate in all provinces, autonomous regions, and municipalities across the country will exceed 30%.

　12 ( )

　A. This is a heroic mother, a mother with an open mind.

B. The article analyzes the strategic characteristics adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.

C. Cigarette smuggling is very rampant, and my country’s customs has made cracking down on smuggled cigarettes a priority.

D. The limitations of the author's own era and class cannot but be reflected in his works. This is an issue that we must pay attention to when evaluating ancient literary works.

　13 ( )

　A. The temptation of surfing the Internet is irresistible to modern people, but the expensive online consumption makes Internet fans heartbroken.

B. It was recently confirmed by relevant departments that the high school freshmen in my country who entered school in September 2000 will no longer use the current high school Chinese textbooks that have been in use for 20 years. Middle schools in various regions can decide on their own to choose one of the two new textbooks, "High School Chinese Experimental Textbook" and "High School Chinese Experimental Textbook" compiled by the People's Education Press based on their own circumstances.

C. We must overcome the tendency to only focus on developing tourism and not pay attention to the protection of tourism resources, and take practical measures to protect the river embankments.

D. According to statistics: there are at least 200 million paulownia trees planted in Henan Province, and the paulownia intercropping area has increased to more than 10 million acres.

　14 ( )

A. Tsinghua University uses an online test, allowing candidates to "talk" with professors online, and then multiple professors vote for recommendations, and finally the school decides whether to admit the students. .

B. If China wants to join the WTO and participate in international competition, it urgently needs to protect intellectual property rights and enforce trademark laws.

C. Created a breach at Huayuankou in Zhengzhou, directly submerging a population of more than 6.19 million in 13 counties in Henan and Anhui provinces.

D. Lu Xun attached great importance to the literary and artistic creation of children. He pointed out: The destiny of children is the destiny of the future.

　15 ( )

A. This station will broadcast a televised speech on production safety issues by the Director of the National Work Safety Commission at noon today.

B. His parents are both middle school teachers, and his mother teaches at his alma mater, Xixiang No. 1 Middle School. This time, she traveled thousands of miles to come to Beijing as a school representative.

C. The target audience of this magazine is mainly middle school Chinese teachers and other Chinese workers.

D. Looking along the sound of the flute, I saw a young man sitting by the lake playing the flute. The sound of the flute was so sad and sad.

Answer

1. A(B) "contained" is moved to the front of "infinity". C "Lenin used in the past" is moved to the front of "various" . D "cause" is moved to the front of "extensive")

2. D (A "all make people" is inconsistent with the subject of the previous sentence. B "rhythm" "makes people see" is the main thing. It means that it does not match. C "Word" is placed after "even". )

3. B (A cannot "self-sufficiency" in "cotton", not "cotton production". C "feed" Life "The verb and object do not match. D The negation is inappropriate.)

4. B (A The subject is inconsistent, the second half of the sentence is changed to "We also ran a blackboard newspaper" C The subject and predicate are not matched, so it is changed to "? To what extent is caring and responsibility weak?". D

The object and object do not match, "strengthen" is changed to "perfect".)

5. D (A to "master" B Go to "from now" C

The meaning of "women are equal under the law" is unclear. It is unclear whether it is "women themselves are equal" or "women and men are equal under the law")

6. B(A "insight" and "opinion" have semantic overlap. C remove "the same kind of thing". D "put one on the side" is ambiguous.)

7. B(A The subject of "join" is unclear. C The wording is inappropriate, "shame" is changed to "tooth". D The expression is irregular, "duoyi" is changed to "hundred million")

8. D( A The subject is inconsistent, "developed" is changed to "developed" B "all" is placed after "teacher" C

"Report" lacks an object, you can add "practice" after the original sentence. . )

9. D (A. "Since" is placed at the beginning of the sentence. B. The wording is inappropriate, "reform" is changed to "establish". C. "Be" is added after "young people".)

10. C (A. Put "those" at the beginning of the sentence. B. Change "pay" to "collect". D. Change "double" to "half".)

11. D (A "output" and "development" have improper subject and predicate matching. B go to "wait". C "correctly implement-" and "deep understanding" reverse the order.)

12. D (A "A hero's There is ambiguity in "mother". B There is ambiguity in whether "mother" and "are prepositions or conjunctions. C Add "work" after the original sentence.)

13. B (A uses inappropriate words, "online" is changed to "online" ". C "overcome" and "tendency" do not match the verb and object. D "at least" is contradictory to "left and right".)

14. A (B is an inappropriate wording, "manage well" is changed to "work" "Do a good job". C "Drown the population" The object and object do not match. D There is ambiguity in the first half of the sentence.)

15. A (B "Thousands of miles away" is placed after "ye". C Remove "oriented". D The subject is inconsistent, remove "the sound of the flute". )