Chen Taiqiu made an appointment with a friend to travel at noon. After noon, Chen Taiqiu left without waiting. My friend didn't arrive until I left. Fiona Fang was seven years old and playing outside the door. A friend asked Fiona Fang, "Is your father there?" Fiona Fang replied, "I've been waiting for you for a long time. You haven't arrived yet, and now you're gone." The friend said angrily, "What a gentleman! Meet people, but leave others to go. " Fiona Fang said, "You made an appointment with my father at noon, but you didn't arrive. This is a credit default. " It is impolite to scold your father for a child. "My friend was ashamed and got off to pull Fiona Fang. Fiona Fang walked into the gate and never looked back.
The original text is as follows: Chen Taiqiu went out with friends, but she didn't reach the halfway, so Taiqiu gave up. After you go, forget it. Fiona Fang is seven years old and playing outside the door. Chen Taiqiu's friend asked Fiona Fang, "Is your father there?" ? "Hui Yuan replied," My father waited for you for a long time, and you left before you arrived. The friend got angry and said, "No humanity!" Walk with people, walk with people. "Fiona Fang said," you and your family will be in Japan. If Japan and China do not arrive, there will be no letter; It is impolite to scold your father. " Feeling ashamed, my friend got out of the car and tried to hold his hand. Yuan Fang also walked into the car door.
Full text appreciation:
The full text of Chen Taiqiu and the Friendship Period is only 103, but it tells a complete story (a debate about keeping promises and breaking promises), portrays three distinctive characters, and shows that people should be polite and keep promises when interacting with each other. Such a limited text contains so much content, which is really concise. It is very difficult to do this if you are not proficient in language refining.
Chen Taiqiu and the refined language during the friendship period are reflected in the whole article. At the beginning of the article, the key words such as "date", "date", "not coming", "giving up" and "even" are used to explain the matter, time and reason clearly. Moreover, in these accounts, two different roles (one trustworthy and one untrustworthy) are pushed to readers at one time.
At the end of the article, although there are only a few words, it is brilliant. The three verbs of "shame", "lower" and "quotation" depict the mentality and behavior of friends who want to correct their mistakes. Fiona Fang's stubbornness in contempt for "treachery" is also vividly described by the words "entering and ignoring". In the second layer (reprimanding friends), which best reflects the central idea of the article, although the author uses a lot more pen and ink than the beginning and end, the text is still very refined. As far as narrative sentences are concerned, when a friend asked Fiona Fang, his mood changed sharply from "questioning" to "anger", which fully showed his rude character. When describing the anger of refuting friends, words such as "answer" and "yue" are chosen, with a calm tone, which well shows the character of not being afraid of friends' anger, being reasonable and being good at coping.