The owner of the hut is an old man. His wrinkled face, gray and slack, recalled his weather-beaten years. He is all skin and bones, and his waist is bent badly. His clothes always make people think he is an old beggar.
At present, the only "job" of the old people is to collect and sell junk, and sometimes they sit at the gate of the yard and take a nap or bask in the sun.
Bottles, broken cans and scrap iron filled the yard, leaving only a narrow passage where you can put your feet down. These rags almost flooded the hut.
Nobody cares about the history of old people now. He is a coal miner. It is said that when he was young, he had an object in his hometown, because it was a "coal spot" and he blew it. Later, he didn't think much: he didn't go back to his hometown after retirement and built this hut.
In this way, the old man lives with the rags in the yard and the flowers on the wall, day after day, year after year.
One day, the old man sat at the gate of the yard and died in a deep sleep. It was a cloudy evening, flowers were in full bloom, and the afterglow of the sunset locked him in a cage.
A few days later, the city radio and TV station reported an explosive news. Someone donated 10,000 yuan to the Municipal Education Foundation. The donor was him, the owner of the hut and the old man who picked up junk.
[Brief Comment]: The author is a middle school student in Hebi Mining Bureau of Henan Province. This article is about real people.
The success of this paper lies in the use of environmental description, portrait description, profile description and other techniques, which makes people feel that the elderly are extremely ordinary, extremely pitiful and unfortunate, thus causing people's sympathy and even pity. Finally, the feat of donating 10 thousand yuan to the "Municipal Education Foundation" was reported. The huge contrast greatly enhances the touching power.
The environmental description in this paper plays a role in displaying the characters' thoughts and personalities.
For example, although the hut is broken, there are all kinds of flowers and plants on the wall, which reflects the owner's love for beauty and pursuit of life.
The description of the environment full of rags in the house shows the poor living conditions of the old people.
"One day, the old man sat at the gate of the yard and died in a deep sleep. It was a cloudy evening, flowers were in full bloom, and the afterglow of the sun kept him in a cage. " This description of the environment sets off the beautiful hearts of the elderly.
Look at the introduction of the article again:
"Almost no one cares about the old man ..." A profile describes him as an ordinary old man. No status, no influence, no respect.
"It is said that ..." A profile description, through the mouth of others, confessed the old man's misfortune.
Write an article about the portraits of my parents and old classmates. Every portrait is an assignment of 100 words, father. My father is very ordinary. He is neither handsome nor handsome. There is always a simple taste in his eyes under the eyebrows that are not too long or too short. Mom. Mother was a beauty when she was young. Although she doesn't have bright eyes and white teeth as in the past, a pair of smiling eyes often makes people feel warm. Old man. Dark skin and wrinkles on the face are the vicissitudes of life brought by years. His hands are so rough that they seem to have fallen from the bark of a dead tree, so an old man who has been scavenging for many years is so lonely that he can only watch stray dogs with his classmates. I have a classmate, tall, with big eyes and bright eyes. He is a sunny boy and loves to laugh. He often likes sports with basketball in his hand. What he sees most is energy on the basketball court.
Composition describing the appearance of the old man Near our home, there is an old man who repairs bicycles.
He set up a tent by the roadside and lived there. All his possessions are bicycle repair tools and a few worn-out clothes. He is thin and his clothes are a little yellow. I was deeply impressed by the seemingly extraordinary appearance of this ordinary fork.
Every time after school, I see him sitting on the side of the road, with a sign saying "bicycle repair" hanging in front of him, waiting for someone who needs to repair the car. One day, my bike broke down, the tire was punctured by a nail, and the body was scraped black and blue.
At that time, I immediately thought of the old man who set up a stall on the roadside, and I pushed the car to the old man. I told the old man my request out of breath.
The old man smiled at me and said, "Don't worry, take your time." Then, the old man quickly checked the car and said humorously, "It was badly hurt."
After that, he removed the tire, polished the punctured place with an unknown tool, and then applied glue to make it up. After putting the original leaking place in the water to make sure it won't leak again, the old man packed the tire and inflated it.
Then patiently use a piece of sandpaper to smooth the "scratch" of the car body until it is difficult to find the scratch. Finally, take out some spray tubes from the back and paint the scratched places.
I stood there and watched the old man lose his mind. Agile disassembly, careful polishing and spraying have transformed this "broken car" in his hands. From: composition daquan "You're done!" The old man said.
When he gave me this brand-new bike, I was extremely happy. It can run with me again, and the price is only 5 yuan! When I picked up my bike, I thanked the old man and felt a sense of respect.
4. Character description, 450-600 words to describe the old man (grandfather). All the lights are out, but grandma's desk lamp is still on. Under the light sat a kind old man with white hair. He is wearing reading glasses and holding a pen. He kept circling, positioning and drawing on the book. He can be absorbed sometimes. Sometimes frown; Sometimes infatuation; Sometimes he laughs. He is my grandfather. Although he is old, he loves reading very much. Because he can pinch plasticine, I often pester him to pinch some gadgets for me. However, as long as Grandpa reads a book and wants him to pinch plasticine, that is "daydreaming". I really want to lock all my grandpa's books in the box. But the next thing changed my mind. Once my mother. I've thought about it for a long time, but I can't think of a reliable answer. Let's ask grandpa, I thought. I ran to find my grandfather and said what my mother said intact. Grandpa touched my head and said, "you boy, you only know how to play and don't read books on weekdays." Pandas only have four fingers! " "Grandpa, your knowledge is really profound! Did you get all this knowledge from books? " I asked enviously. "Of course! There is a golden house in the book and Yan Ruyu in the book'. As long as you are willing to read and read widely, you will be as knowledgeable as your grandfather! "So, in my young mind, I planted the seeds of reading, and the book became my mentor. My grandfather is not only knowledgeable, but also often selflessly helps others to do things and solve problems. One noon, my family was having dinner. Suddenly, Uncle Ma and several uncles came in. Their faces are full of anxiety and helplessness. After exchanging pleasantries with grandpa, they went into the study. I followed curiously. I heard Uncle Ma say in dismay, "My tea tree somehow got a strange disease. First, there was a tumor on the root, and then the tea tree withered. Our farmers rely on these acres of tea gardens to support their families for a year, and now there are no crops. This ... this is great! " With that, he held the table in one hand and lowered his head. At this time, an uncle took out a root of a tea tree and handed it to grandpa. Grandpa put on reading glasses, grabbed the roots in his left hand and held a magnifying glass in his right. I saw my grandfather poke his roots away from time to time and kept watching: he sometimes took a pen and drew circles on the paper; Sometimes put down the pen and frown; Go back and ask a word or two. Ma Bobo's mood fluctuates with grandpa's expression. After a long time, Grandpa handed Uncle Ma a piece of paper full of handwriting. Uncle Ma took the paper, just like holding a lifesaving elixir. He said in a trembling voice, "Thank you so much. I really don't know how to repay you." "Hey, my old friend, you are so popular. Help this little thing. "Ma Bobo it's time to go. Grandpa grabbed his hand and said, "Wait a minute." With that, he quickly walked into the study and took out a pile of things. When Uncle Ma saw it, it turned out to be a pile of money. Uncle Ma insisted on not accepting it, but Grandpa said, "Your family has a bad harvest this year. This money is a token of my appreciation. If you have any difficulties in the future, come to me. " Uncle Ma holds the money. He is not selfish, but takes pleasure in helping others. Thinking of this, grandpa's body can't help getting bigger and bigger in my eyes. Grandpa, although he has never done anything earth-shattering and has no gorgeous appearance, his ordinary body clearly implies extraordinary qualities. Yes! Grandpa's spirit of helping others and loving books will be a monument in my heart, a monument in my heart, an example for me to learn and admire.
5. Portrait description and composition room for old people or children: 2004-112 There was a shabby hut in the workers' village.
The hut has walls and mud piles. There are all kinds of flowers and plants on the wall.
The owner of the hut is an old man. His wrinkled face, gray and slack, recalled his weather-beaten years. He is all skin and bones, and his waist is bent badly. His clothes always make people think he is an old beggar.
Few people pay attention to the old man. Occasionally someone greets him intentionally or unintentionally. He always squints his deep-set eyes and talks, but no one wants to take the time to listen to what he is saying.
At present, the only "job" of the old people is to collect and sell junk, and sometimes they sit at the gate of the yard and take a nap or bask in the sun. Bottles, broken cans and scrap iron filled the yard, leaving only a narrow passage where you can put your feet down.
These rags almost flooded the hut. Nobody cares about the history of old people now. He is a coal miner.
It is said that when he was young, he had an object in his hometown, because it was a "coal spot" and he blew it. Later, he didn't think about it: he didn't go back to his hometown after retirement and built this hut.
In this way, the old man lives with the rags in the yard and the flowers on the wall, day after day, year after year. One day, the old man sat at the gate of the yard and died in a deep sleep.
It was a cloudy evening, flowers were in full bloom, and the afterglow of the sunset locked him in a cage. A few days later, the city radio and TV station reported an explosive news.
Someone donated 10,000 yuan to the Municipal Education Foundation. The donor was him, the owner of the hut and the old man who picked up junk. [Brief Comment]: The author is a middle school student in Hebi Mining Bureau of Henan Province.
This article is about real people. The success of this paper lies in the use of environmental description, portrait description, profile description and other techniques, which makes people feel that the elderly are extremely ordinary, extremely pitiful and unfortunate, thus causing people's sympathy and even pity. Finally, the feat of donating 10 thousand yuan to the "Municipal Education Foundation" was reported.
The huge contrast greatly enhances the touching power. The environmental description in this paper plays a role in displaying the characters' thoughts and personalities.
For example, although the hut is broken, there are all kinds of flowers and plants on the wall, which reflects the owner's love for beauty and pursuit of life. The description of the environment full of rags in the house shows the poor living conditions of the old people.
"One day, the old man sat at the gate of the yard and died in a deep sleep. It was a cloudy evening, flowers were in full bloom, and the afterglow of the sun kept him in a cage. "
This description of the environment sets off the beautiful hearts of the elderly. Look at the introduction of the article again: "Almost no one pays attention to that old man …" A brief description shows that this is an ordinary insignificant old man.
No status, no influence, no respect. "I heard people say ..." A profile description borrowed others' words and confessed the old man's misfortune.
6. My grandfather My grandfather is 74 years old, short and chubby, with a bronze face and eyebrows like two exclamation points without dots.
A pair of small eyes are always smiling. When talking, they always close their left eyes and only open their right eyes. Grandpa lost all his teeth and installed false teeth, but he took them off as soon as he ate and put them in a mouthwash cup. I asked my grandfather, "You paid for false teeth, why don't you wear them when you eat?" Grandpa said, "Eating with dentures is tasteless. Fake is better than real, or teeth are better! " "Grandpa doesn't leave hair. He always likes to go to the barber shop to shave his hair and beard. His scalp and mouth are blue. Grandpa said, "It's better to scrape, scrape and stop itching, without lice and sores." "
On weekdays, grandpa always wears a double-breasted coat and leggings. Although grandpa is so old, he always likes to wear a pair of liberation shoes.
Grandpa said, "This heel is very comfortable to wear." The toe of the shoe is broken, and grandpa is reluctant to throw it away.
Dig out the steel file, scissors, glue and waste bicycle tires from the box, then file the toe flat, then cut off a piece of rubber, file it flat, apply glue, air it for a while, and then stick the rubber on the toe. Grandpa wears these liberation shoes and goes up and down the fifth floor two or three times a day! I advised grandpa: "You are so old, don't go upstairs and downstairs by yourself, wait for me to help you go upstairs and downstairs!" " Grandpa said, "I have worked all my life. I feel uncomfortable and bored at home. I'd better walk around! " " .
7. Primary school composition describing the appearance of the elderly (500 words) 1. Grandpa is 73 years old. He is always cheerful when he meets people, and a small black felt hat is often buckled on his bald head.
Grandpa always walks with his hands behind his back. He is really a "big official". Grandpa is an old shoemaker, and the money he usually earns is spent on my brother and me.
Grandpa's care and love for me will never be forgotten. 2. My grandfather is a farmer. I like Ya by his side, counting the wrinkles on his forehead like a stream, and I prefer his rough hand, which is cracked like pine bark, to touch my smooth head.
Usually grandpa is silent and only knows how to work. He is hardworking and simple, and he has been farming all his life.
In the cold and hot summer, in the storm, he always gets up at dawn and works, and comes back with dirt when the sun goes down. Grandpa worked hard to raise five children.
As long as I can remember, I seldom heard him say a few words, but when I was happy, I just smiled when I saw my little grandson. My grandfather is a painter with a square face and silver hair. Although he has no white beard and chin, he has that handsome face.
When he talks about painting, he always likes it so much that he can't help gesticulating with his hands. I can't understand what he said, or the painters who came to ask for advice said that what Grandpa said was as superb as his painting.
Due to years of hard work, the back of grandpa's hand is as rough as the bark of an old pine tree, and a series of holes have been cracked, and several thick calluses have been ground on his palm; Time has mercilessly carved deep wrinkles on his blushing face. His black hair and goatee have turned gray, only those eyes are still so radiant, although the corners of his eyes are covered with dense crow's feet ... I miss my grandfather. Grandpa has a bronzed face, eyes like two bells and a goatee floating on his pointed chin.
He is tall and has broad shoulders. Although he is over 70 years old, he can speak with a powerful voice like Hong Zhong. Even the young man can't keep up with him when he walks. 6. Ji Lao scale is in his fifties, but his body is as hard as a stone tablet; An egg shaped thing that just came from outside his mouth kicked him in the chest with a gouge, as if he had been bounced by a flea.
He is famous for his superb craftsmanship, but he can only be half hungry and half full; In his words, I have never had enough to eat in my life. He has a bad temper, doesn't marry a family, doesn't believe in ghosts and gods, and drinks hard liquor and smells snuff; Sleep when you are drunk, snore like thunder, sneeze like shooting.
7. Grandpa has been retired for two years, with a thin skeleton and fishnet lines on his face. The gray hair on the top of the head seems to be wearing a small felt hat.
When you laugh, your chin sticks up high, because there are few teeth in your mouth and your lips are deeply sunken. 8. The old man's flesh is not much, and he is as thin as an old osprey.
However, the tanned face, short white beard are particularly energetic, and those deep-set eyes are particularly bright. It is rare to see such sharp and bright eyes, except on Baiyangdian Lake.
9. A fat old man in high spirits heard the dog barking and walked out of the house. He is about sixty years old. His light brown hair is well maintained, but his beard is gray.
This is Professor Blay. 10, my grandmother's dress today is very different from usual: wearing a wool hat, a brand-new black woolen coat, a pair of blended tweed pants and shiny flat shoes.
She walked out of the door with a cane in her hand, a beaming face and a red paper in her hand.
8. Description of the old man's appearance My grandfather is a farmer. I like him very much, counting the wrinkles on his forehead like a stream, and I prefer his rough hands like pine bark to touch my smooth head.
Usually grandpa is silent and only knows how to work. He is hardworking and simple, and he has been farming all his life.
In the cold and hot summer, in the storm, he always gets up at dawn and works, and comes back with dirt when the sun goes down. Grandpa worked hard to raise five children.
As long as I can remember, I seldom hear him say a few words, but when I am happy, I just smile when I see my little grandson. My grandfather is a painter with a square face and silver hair. Although he has no white beard and chin, he has that handsome face.
When he talks about painting, he always likes it so much that he can't help gesticulating with his hands. I can't understand what he said, or the painters who came to ask for advice said that what Grandpa said was as superb as his painting.
Due to years of hard work, the back of grandpa's hand is as rough as the bark of an old pine tree, which has cracked a series of holes and grinded several thick calluses on his palm; Time has mercilessly carved deep wrinkles on his blushing face. His black hair and goatee have turned gray, only those eyes are still so radiant, although the corners of his eyes are covered with dense crow's feet ... I miss my grandfather. Grandpa has a bronzed face, eyes like two bells and a goatee floating on his pointed chin.
He is tall and has broad shoulders. Although he is over 70 years old, he can speak with a powerful voice like Hong Zhong. Even the young man can't keep up with him when he walks. 6. Ji Lao scale is in his fifties, but his body is as hard as a stone tablet; An egg shaped thing that just came from outside his mouth kicked him in the chest with a gouge, as if he had been bounced by a flea.
He is famous for his superb craftsmanship, but he can only be half hungry and half full; In his words, I have never had enough to eat in my life. He has a bad temper, doesn't marry a family, doesn't believe in ghosts and gods, and drinks hard liquor and smells snuff; Sleep when you are drunk, snore like thunder, sneeze like shooting.
7. Grandpa has been retired for two years, with a thin skeleton and fishnet lines on his face. The gray hair on the top of the head seems to be wearing a small felt hat.
When you laugh, your chin sticks up high, because there are few teeth in your mouth and your lips are deeply sunken. 8. The old man's flesh is not much, and he is as thin as an old osprey.
However, the tanned face, short white beard are particularly energetic, and those deep-set eyes are particularly bright. It is rare to see such sharp and bright eyes, except on Baiyangdian Lake.
9. A fat old man in high spirits heard the dog barking and walked out of the house. He is about sixty years old. His light brown hair is well maintained, but his beard is gray.
This is Professor Blay. 10, my grandmother's dress today is very different from usual: wearing a wool hat, a brand-new black woolen coat, a pair of blended tweed pants and shiny flat shoes.
She walked out of the door with a cane in her hand, a beaming face and a red paper in her hand. 165438+
He can't live without a small teapot all day. He held it when he walked, touched it when he read the newspaper, and even put it next to his head when he slept, as if he were afraid of being stolen. 12, my grandfather is short. He always wears a dark blue dress.
His weather-beaten face has accumulated ups and downs for decades. Although grandpa is 68 years old, he is always reluctant to leave his precious job-the glasses factory.
My uncle and grandmother repeatedly did his ideological work and let him leave the army. My grandfather kept shaking his head. 13, my grandfather is a real old man with crops.
Bronzed face, deeply engraved with wrinkles; Two big hands like small cattail fans are covered with calluses. Grandpa is over 60 years old this year, but he can start farming and dare to compete with young people.
14, when I was in the first grade, a strange old man came to my house. He is tall and thin, with wrinkles on his forehead and face like a knife, a pair of yellow and small worn glasses on his nose, and a black cotton-padded coat covering his heels.
The coat seems to have never been washed and become shiny. Seeing him reminds me of Mr. Accountant in those small shops in the movie.
I hid behind my father and watched him secretly. Dad was talking to him, as if he suddenly remembered something. He pulled me in front of "Mr. Accountant" and asked me to call him "Mr. Accountant" and "Beloved" with a big smile.
I got up the courage to gently call out "touts" and quickly hid behind my father. 15. My grandmother is over seventy years old.
The head is covered with silver hair, and the lines on the head and eyes are heavy. She usually wears a blue coat and black trousers
Grandma's hair naturally curls and looks really beautiful; Kind eyes always smile, and words are crisp and pleasant. 16, grandma is seventy years old, her short hair is covered with frost, her big eyes have sunk deeply, her teeth in her mouth are almost * * *, her rough hands are covered with blood vessels like earthworms, and her weather-beaten face is full of wrinkles, which seems to record her hardships in the past 70 years.
17, our Chinese teacher is a little old man, wearing a pair of thick myopia glasses. He walked slowly, as if he were brewing a masterpiece. In addition, he usually speaks with a mouthful of "connecting people with words", and his language is humorous, which really smacks of Old Master Q Q. Although he is like this, he is really good in class.
18, Grandma Liu has always been very clean in my impression. When I walk beside her, I always smell a faint smell of soap. Her hair is always well combed, and it is not messy.
Not only did she clean herself, but everything in the house was spotless. She washes the clothes of her son, daughter-in-law and grandson by herself. They always dress straight.
I didn't find her idle when I went to her house. 19, Xiao Bobo is a retired cadre of the Second Light Industry Bureau of our district.
He is of medium height and strong.