1. Whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.

It is said in the front that "whether we can cultivate" and later that "it is also the fundamental task". Then it has become a fundamental task to fail to cultivate it.

2. Maintaining a hard and simple life style is a big issue related to whether the broad masses of cadres can inherit and carry forward the revolutionary tradition.

"Maintaining a hard and simple life style" is the first step, and "Whether it can be inherited and carried forward" is the second step, which also makes the logical mistake of being unable to take care of both sides.

3. Whether the Northern Alliance will enter Kabul, It depends on whether the Afghan factions reach a political agreement and whether the Taliban compromise.

The two sides of "whether to March" and "whether to reach a political agreement among the Afghan factions" should be changed to "whether to reach a political agreement among the Afghan factions", so as to take care of them.

4. We deeply feel that, The vitality of a newspaper lies in whether it can provide readers with rich, novel and high-quality spiritual food.

It should be changed to "whether a newspaper can have vitality lies in ...".

5. We express our heartfelt thanks and cordial condolences to academicians of the two academies for their great contributions to the modernization of the motherland over the years.

We can't "sympathize" with "great contributions".

6. Where scientific farming and yield per unit area are higher,

"scientific farming" should be removed.

7. The company has a big business, and more attention should be paid to saving unnecessary expenses and unnecessary waste.

Saving unnecessary waste "is not feasible.

8. The history of the Party shows that the implementation of the mass line is good or bad. It is related to the success of the revolution and construction.

It should be changed to "It is related to the success of the revolution and construction".

9. A paper with correct viewpoints, sufficient arguments and complete structure is an important criterion to measure its quality.

It should be changed to "Whether the viewpoints are correct and the arguments are sufficient, Whether the structure is complete ".

1. We can't take speaking actively in a meeting as a criterion to measure a person's political consciousness.

The front should be changed to" speaking actively in a meeting ".

2. Misuse of related words and prepositions

1. The reason why" English radio lectures "have helped me a lot is that I think lectures and exercises should be combined. It is its outstanding advantage.

The reason why "harmony" is because of "collocation". The second half of the sentence should be changed to "because it has the advantage of combining lectures and exercises".

2. From May 12 to June 1, China will go to the high seas in the circular sea area with a radius of 7 nautical miles from the mainland to the Pacific Ocean at 7 degrees south latitude and 171 degrees 32 east longitude. Launch a launch vehicle.

It should be changed to "from the mainland to the center of the Pacific Ocean".

3. Regardless of the extremely unfavorable climatic conditions and geographical environment, the climbers still overcame the difficulties and successfully climbed to the top.

"Regardless of the meaning", "whatever" and "all (always, also)" match. Match with "but (but, but, but, still)".

4. Teachers and students of our school all rely on work permits and student ID cards to enter and leave the school gate.

Conjunction "and" incorrect use "should be replaced by" or "because teachers and students can't have two certificates with their peers.

5. Although the housing is only six square meters more than in the past, the three generations of old and young can no longer be crowded. I can also have a place to study and write.

The word "but" should be added before "three generations" to match with "although".

6. The size of a person's talent is completely determined by his acquired study and practice.

"because" is a conjunction, which is used for compound sentences and leads to a clause indicating reasons. There must be a clause that reflects the results. It should be changed to "determined by ..."

7. If they have really learned the theory well and can graduate in the training class, it is better to say that they have only learned the short theory of image engineering.

"If ... is not as good as ...", it should be changed to "It is better than ..." < Explain it to the students who are a little obsessed with it.

This sentence is a hypothetical relationship, and the word "although" should be changed to "even if".

9. If people's thoughts decline and the social atmosphere is not good, it will be difficult for the economy to go up, and even if they do, they will not be consolidated.

The subjects of the clauses before and after are different, and the related words should be changed before the subjects. On October and March 17th, six members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee because of the bribery scandal. The next day, all the world's major newspapers reported in detail the incident that shocked the international sports world.

The preposition is inappropriate, and "about" should be changed to "about".

11. The car thief stepped on the gas pedal and fled desperately when he saw someone chasing him. This sentence is a continuation rather than a turning point. "Instead" should be changed to "immediately".

12. If people watch TV programs for four or five hours continuously, they will feel very tired.

The related words are misplaced and should be changed to "If people continue".

13. During the construction process, they hand over every important technical issue to the masses for discussion.

"Right" should be changed to "Ba".

14. Although the masses missed him after his death, he was not listed as an artist in the art world.

The related words were misplaced and should be changed to "Although the masses missed him".

15. Please rest assured that despite the difficulties encountered, We should also resolutely complete the task.

Change "although" to "regardless"

3. Improper word order

1. The name Jiao Yulu may be unfamiliar to young people, but it is familiar to people over 4 years old.

The preposition "right" is wrong, resulting in the inversion of subject and object, and it should be changed to "Young people may still be unfamiliar with the name Jiao Yulu. However, people over 4 are familiar with him. "

2. It's unexpected that our class will win the championship in this basketball match, and it has defeated six powerful opponents in a row.

We should defeat the opponents first and then win the championship.

3. Sprite, coke, mineral water and other drinks are popular summer drinks in every household.

It should be changed to" It is popular in every household. " After about half an hour, people handed in their papers one after another.

It should be changed to "People came one after another ...".

5. This spring rain was intermittent for more than ten days. All the seedlings that have just been sown have turned yellow.

It should be changed to "This spring rain is intermittent ...".

6. This incident has caused widespread discussion among teachers and students.

7. The newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2, years ago were exhibited in the Palace Museum.

It should be changed to "The newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2, years ago were exhibited".

8, Criminals persecute children cruelly by the most vicious means.

It should be changed to "Criminals treat children by the most vicious means ...".

9. What a beneficial influence Ba Jin has on my love of literature and approaching literature.

First, it should be "approaching literature" and then "loving literature".

1. People will praise it in the 21st century. This shows that the interpersonal relationship in the 195s and 196s did have something that was memorable and worthy of recognition.

First of all, it was "worthy of recognition", and then it was "memorable".

11. During the patriotic education activities in our school, we should pay attention to educating students on revolutionary traditions. Cultivate students' consciousness and initiative to study hard and observe discipline.

It should be changed to "initiative to study hard" and "initiative to observe discipline". We should switch "consciousness" and "initiative".

12. In order to strive for high speed, we must pay close attention to the modernization of science and technology and make it ahead of production and construction. Make China's national economy develop with advanced science and technology.

It should be changed to "Make China's national economy develop with advanced science and technology".

13. The central content of this census of geographical names is to update, fill in gaps and correct mistakes, that is, to supplement missing geographical names, correct wrong geographical names and update outdated geographical names.

It should be changed to "update outdated geographical names and supplement missing geographical names. Correcting wrong place names ".

14. Now fake and shoddy products are repeatedly banned in the market. I hope consumers will pay attention to them, and those who seek profits will not be given an opportunity.

It should be changed to" I hope to attract consumers' attention ".

15. The Chinese patent medicines produced by this time-honored pharmaceutical factory are famous at home and abroad for their excellent materials, exquisite technology, unique formula and remarkable curative effect.

It should be changed to". Exquisite craftsmanship and remarkable curative effect ".

16. Austrian scientists reached the above conclusion after freezing, collecting, analyzing and refining the rain in the clouds at the foot of the Alps.

There are two linguistic defects. First," rain in the clouds "should be changed to" rain "; Second, the word order is improper, and it should be changed to "collect, freeze, refine and analyze".

17. I don't agree to buy these high-grade furniture, not only because these things are not needed by us, but more importantly, it doesn't conform to the principle of thrift.

The subject and object should be reversed, and it should be changed to "these things are for us".

18. I really feel unaccustomed.

The subject and object are reversed, and it should be changed to "Some comrades who are used to operating on the old track are really unaccustomed to being in line with the international standards".

4. Improper collocation

1. The relevant departments have criticized, educated and seriously dealt with a few incidents of disrespecting sanitation work, making troubles without reason, and even beating and insulting sanitation workers.

The word "event" should be changed to "people".

2. A factory is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes and new materials, driven by technological progress.

"Developing new technologies and new processes" is not feasible, and it should be changed to "devoting to the research and development of new products and new materials and new technologies and new processes".

3. This good deed is only known to most people.

The attributive and the head word are not matched, "this good deed" is ok, "this good deed" is not, so "good deed" should be removed.

4. I heard from the train announcer that some cities will pass along the way, among which Dalian is.

The verb-object is not matched, and "hearing about cities" is not available. It should be changed to "hear the name of ... the city".

5. Some hospitals of the China People's Liberation Army in Beijing immediately formed medical teams and rushed to the disaster area, just as they heard the sound of the bugle call on the battlefield.

The subject does not match, and "hospitals go to the disaster area" doesn't work, so the subject should be changed to "hospital medical workers".

6. The color of this soap bubble looks like. It is bound to be shattered.

The subject and predicate don't match, and the word "color" should be deleted instead of color.

7. The coal reserves in Shanxi Province are one of the richest regions in China.

The subject and predicate don't match, and "the reserves are one of the regions" doesn't make sense, and it should be changed to "Shanxi Province is China's coal" And was selected by some anthologies.

The subject and predicate don't match, "She was selected by anthologies" doesn't make sense, so it should be changed to "These works were also selected by ...".

9. Laid-off workers are effectively organized and welfare undertakings such as catering, sewing, unpacking and washing are well built.

"Construction undertakings" don't match, so "construction" should be changed to "establishment". It has been solved by the Party and the people.

"Solving disasters" is not properly matched, so "solving" should be changed to "overcoming".

11. High-tech parks rely on intellectual density and aim at developing new industries and high-tech achievements, and constantly promote the combination of scientific research, education and production.

If the verb and object are not matched, "developing new industries" can be used to develop "high-tech achievements" We have adopted a series of fruitful reforms in the economic system, and made great achievements.

The verb and object are not matched, and it is not feasible to "adopt the reform".

5. Improper denial

1. In order to prevent this kind of traffic accident from happening again, we have strengthened the education and management of traffic safety.

"Preventing it from happening again" means letting it happen again, and should be deleted. In recent years, he misses his hometown almost all the time.

"all the time" means "all the time", so we should change "all the time" to "all the time" or "all the time".

3. We should know and master the objective laws of things and try to avoid making mistakes or making fewer mistakes.

The rhetorical question is also a triple negative, and the triple negative becomes a negative, so the word "no" should be removed.

5. Countless facts tell us that there are not insurmountable difficulties, so we should strive for victory with confidence.

It is also a triple negative, and the word "no" should be removed.

6. How to prevent valuables during the exhibition? It's a headache for the organizers.

The word "free" should be removed.

7. I don't think anyone can deny that the play has no negative effects.

The word "no" should be removed.

8. Now that science is developed, it may not be entirely possible to transplant memories.

Missing a word "no" becomes a negative. It should be changed to "maybe it's not completely impossible".

9. No one can deny that parents' actions can't be said to be caring for their children, but the result may be counterproductive.

The word "can't be said" should be removed.

1. In any case, we can't help but admit that the sun doesn't rise in the east and set in the west.

Improper denial, The word "no" should be removed.

6. Unreasonable

1. As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see that all pictures and posters about Macao's history are hung on the west wall of the corridor.

"Posters" are also included.