Keywords: interest persists in computer high school, senior three, 1 words

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This article is suitable for senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three, senior three. When it comes to "Microsoft", everyone will think of one person, that is, Bill Gates. Now, Microsoft has long been the company with the highest market value in the world. Bill Gates' enthusiasm and super ability for computers deeply touched me. I picked up this book and couldn't put it down. I really wanted to read it all at once. This book describes how Bill Gates became famous. Let me introduce his growing process. Bill Gates was born in Seattle, USA in 1955. His parents and grandfather were successful people. When Bill was in kindergarten, he especially liked to ride the rocking wooden horse. When he got carried away, he was in a hurry and fell down abruptly from his horse. The teacher said that he was particularly active and never stopped for a second. His habit of shaking his head kept moving until he grew up, and it has become a striking "registered trademark". When he was a child, Bill Gates watched TV later in order to watch TV on weekend nights. Bill Gates went to middle school. Because of the computer class, he began to like computers. From then on, he began to program, helping schools to use computers for free. As soon as school was over, he rushed to the science room and began to program. Sometimes he didn't even come home. He often sat alone in a chair thinking about how to program, and everyone called him a nerd. Finally, Bill was admitted to Harvard University, the world's top university, through his efforts. After reading this book, we should learn from Bill. Although we are not geniuses, we should study hard now to prepare for the future. Bill's entrepreneurial success also took a long period of hard work, so we should know how to cherish time, use time and grasp the possibility of success. There is a famous saying in China, "If a young man doesn't work hard, the boss will be sad." We should learn from his persistent spirit of forgetting to eat and sleep, and strive to enrich ourselves. Teacher's Comments: This is a post-reading essay. The author introduces Bill Gates' experiences from childhood to adulthood, which makes readers see his persistence and intention in doing things, especially describing his concentration on computers after he went to middle school and his experience of giving up his studies at Harvard University for his career, which shows his persistence and perseverance. The author also tells the enlightenment he got from Bill Gates' successful experience: "Any success is achieved through a long period of hard work", and expresses that he should learn from Bill Gates' "spirit of forgetting to eat and sleep, perseverance", and the content of the composition is more specific and complete. The title of the composition is "Perseverance for the sake of interest". I think this point should be emphasized when introducing Bill Gates' experience and expressing that I want to learn from Bill Gates' spirit, and other aspects should be written in a passing way (such as kindergarten experience and his active personality), so that the content of the composition will be more concentrated and the focus of the composition will be more prominent. The sentence "Help schools use computers for free" is not fluent. "Specializing in software knowledge" should be "delving into software knowledge". After reading this book, we should learn from Bill. Although we are not geniuses, we should study hard now and prepare for the future. There is no turning point between these two sentences, so the connection is not accurate enough. (Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Rodina) 29-11-2 9:48: