1. Write about small things.
2. Discuss right and wrong.
3. Look at sociality.
4. Write a "language sense" essay.
Write about small things
Is there anything to write about in the dormitory? For example, some people sleep in, some eat well, some are particular about dressing up, some quarrel... Is there anything to write about in the classroom? For example, a certain teacher dressed in a special way or gave a lecture that made people laugh, a certain student fell asleep while listening to the lecture or hesitated to answer questions... Is there any writing material in the toilet? For example, there are doggerel poems written on the walls such as "Shit is indispensable, but urine also has a unique flavor"... In short, as long as students have a pair of eyes that "discover beauty", there are many things to write. For example, in response to the bad custom in the dormitory that "someone often uses other people's things", some students paid attention to observation and thought carefully, and wrote: "Take using other people's washbasins as an example. It is not that other people's ones are more fragrant or easier to use. It's because: first, some students don't bring washbasins to school at all and use other people's washbasins exclusively; second, they have washbasins but leave them unused. If they use other people's washbasins, they won't take into account the losses of other people's washbasins. Use as much force as you can, and just kick it away when it is not in use. It is extremely convenient. People who have this kind of living habit will not only become a 'bully' but also an extremely selfish person when they enter the society."
Right and Wrong
Regarding the phenomenon of a girl jumping in line to buy food at the entrance of the cafeteria, some boys thought that "it's not just once or twice that I was caught jumping in line, but I never saw a female compatriot being caught." Caught”, and lamented that “the teachers on duty ‘favor boys over girls’”. Another female classmate had some objections to this: "First, the statement 'not arresting girls, only arresting boys' is not true. I have seen many girls who jumped in line were caught, such as... Second, when it comes to cutting in line, How can a girl be a match for a man? How can a slender girl be a match for a burly man? Don’t you see, guys usually push me and squeeze into a circle composed of countless heads? This is the current situation. Who? Thirdly, the author analyzes that the main reason why teachers don’t arrest boys is that girls are ‘face-loving’ and ‘crying’. I don’t think a girl’s face is worth more than a boy’s. Didn't their years of education tell them how to cheat and use tears to save themselves from danger? We have seen many such images in books and TV, but they don't appear much in schools. Isn't it a little bit unfair to use a point to represent all girls? "Is it appropriate?" Such "writing" among classmates can not only cultivate their own thinking ability, but also stimulate their desire for expression, so that they can "use their energy as writing" rather than "create emotions for writing." .
Look at sociality
Integrate your life with the times and society to think philosophically, discuss major social issues with the small things around you, and jump out of the pit to see the sky. Only in this way can essays reach a new level. Students can think like this: Have you seen this thing I wrote about at home or on the road? Which character in a book or movie does this character I write about look like? Are there many similar people or things in society? What does it tell me? For example, regarding the charity donation made by the whole class to a classmate who lost his parents, some students actually thought of "going to Disneyland to watch Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck" to satisfy a terminally ill nine-year-old girl in my country. An American businessman donated money to invite this little girl to visit the United States, so the classmate wrote: "Chinese and Americans, whether they are yellow-skinned or blue-eyed, live on the same earth, on the same earth. On a piece of land, love can bridge the language barrier, and love can bridge the national divide. Accept my care and look forward to your smile. The structure of the word "human" is to support each other. The world is small, but it is a big family. We are over fifty. The land with a population of 100 million forms a round earth, and the hearts of more than 5 billion people are connected to form concentric circles. "If students often make such free associations, express themselves naturally, and write freely, then they will not have to worry about their writing skills. improve.
Write a "language sense" essay
⑴ Taste the pros and cons of advertising words
⑵ Try to figure out the pros and cons of language from store names and brand names
⑶ Discover new meanings of language from proverbs, ancient sayings, and aphorisms
⑷ Feel the appropriateness of language from slogans and notices
⑸ Taste the refinement and timelessness of language from lyrics
⑹Learn and accumulate language from extracurricular reading
Taste the pros and cons of advertising slogans
Contemporary society has entered the information society, and all kinds of advertisements are overwhelming. Advertising slogans are mostly short and concise, rich in meaning, catchy, and easy to memorize. They are one of the channels for our students to learn languages. For example, the advertising slogan of "Macro" water heater is "Macro, enjoy Macro". The advertising slogan for the "Great Wall" brand electric fan is "Great Wall Fan, Great Wall Fan." In addition, some poorly written advertising slogans are also materials for our language sense analysis. For example: There is a sentence written on the window of a hotel: "The silver moon embraces the beauty." This advertising slogan is too vulgar, especially the word "hold", which is a bit vulgar. Why not change the word "hold" to "ying" or "wai"? This makes it look much more elegant.
Infer the language from the store name and brand name
When people open a business, they all hope to choose a good store name, which means good luck and good business. Novel and unique store names and brand names are often favored by customers. For example, "Xinyijia", this store name includes the three meanings of "new", "only" and "good". It condenses the operator's good wishes and places the operator's heartfelt commitment to customers. Such a store name will definitely be liked by customers. The popular drink "Wahaha" is inseparable from its vivid and vivid name. From the three words "Wahaha", we can get a glimpse of the children's happy, cheerful and overjoyed expressions when drinking this drink. This brand name is really expressive and lifelike. However, in life, some store names are not elegant. For example, "Ah Er Liang Soup", "Ah Er" means "second wife" or "little wife" in Cantonese. The operator seems to have racked his brains and took great pains to choose this store name in order to cater to the vulgar tastes of some people, trying to use "Ah Er" to stimulate others and stimulate consumption. I thought: Ladies will definitely be disgusted with this type of store name, and it will be difficult for them to be interested in patronizing it.
Feel language from slogans and notices
What kind of slogans and notices are we happy to accept? This requires paying attention to the sense of propriety in language, and the language must be appropriate. Usually, exciting and inspiring slogans are hung on the railings on both sides of the streets and at the entrances of schools, factories and mines. Whether these slogans are accurate and inspiring are the scope of our students' language sense essays. Sometimes, when we go to the park to play, we will also see signboards such as "Prohibited" and "Strictly Prohibited". Such commanding and coercive language can make visitors feel heavy and even produce disgust; if If we replace the former with a humane notice, the effect will be completely different. For example, "It is strictly forbidden to enter the grass!" and "It's a pity to step on the green carpet, why not take a few more steps!" These two different notices give people different feelings. The former is cold and tough in wording; the latter is gentle, gentle and has a consultative tone, giving people a kind and warm feeling. It can be seen how important the appropriateness of language is. As long as we are thoughtful people in life, we will find that there are many language phenomena in life that are worthy of our analysis.
Excavate new meanings of language from proverbs, ancient maxims, and aphorisms
Synonyms, ancient maxims, and aphorisms in daily life often serve to exhort, spur, and inspire people. However, with the development of society, some may not still be golden rules. If you taste the proverbs, ancient sayings, and aphorisms in life from different angles, and introduce new ones from the old, you will understand the deep meaning of language. Therefore, we must boldly think in the opposite direction. Some people put forward a converse proposition in response to the famous saying "No one wants to have the highest quality" - "Everyone wants to have the highest quality".
"People who seek nothing but high quality", the "without seeking" here refers to people's indifference to fame and fortune; and "people who seek nothing but high quality" in this sentence refer to people's indifference to fame and wealth. Life and the persistent pursuit of career. There are others like: "Silence is golden"─"Silence may not be golden" and so on.
Taste the refinement and timelessness of language from the lyrics
Our lives are full of songs, and popular songs have entered thousands of households. Our students are young and easy to accept new things. Many students like to sing popular songs. Generally speaking, a good song has implicit, concise, meaningful and beautiful lyrics. We must guide our students to appreciate, taste, and remember beautiful lyrics, so as to achieve the purpose of accumulating language. For example, the lyrics of "The Sound of the Waves Are Still": "Take away a fishing fire and let it warm my eyes; leave a piece of true love and let it park by the maple bridge...." It is full of thoughts and emotions of modern youth, and also contains The beautiful artistic conception of Tang Dynasty poetry. The lyrics are subtle and meaningful. On the contrary, we should abandon some Cantonese lyrics that are not standardized in the language.
Learn and accumulate language from extracurricular reading
Extracurricular reading is an extension of Chinese classroom teaching and the main channel for acquiring subject matter for writing language-sensitive essays. It is necessary to read a large number of ancient and modern literary masterpieces at home and abroad, and to carefully read and chew the precious words and wonderful chapters and fragments in them. And write down your own reading experience. In addition, we should read some newspapers and magazines appropriately to taste and appreciate beautiful language materials.
Seeing flowers in the mist